List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is generally clear but can be more natural and concise. Avoid redundancy and incomplete sentences. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. For example, instead of 'But whenever I went for shopping, the clothes and socks or shoes I don't make a list. I just.', you can say 'However, when shopping for clothes, socks, or shoes, I usually don't make a list because I prefer to choose items spontaneously.'

例: It depends on what I am shopping for. If I am going grocery shopping, I usually make a list at home to ensure I buy everything I need. However, when shopping for clothes, socks, or shoes, I don't make a list because I prefer to choose items spontaneously.

提案: Your answer is understandable but can be improved by using correct grammar and clearer structure. Use linking words to explain your reasoning. For example, instead of 'Rather to make list I usually prefer to go work and we have a work schedule and we all need to follow that work schedule.', you can say 'Instead of making a list, I prefer to follow the work schedule provided, which helps me organize my tasks effectively.'

例: No, I don't usually make a list for my work. Instead, I follow the work schedule provided by my organization, which helps me organize my tasks effectively.

提案: Your answer has good ideas but needs better grammar and clearer expression. Use linking words and avoid repetition. For example, instead of 'If people have a sharp mind, if they can remember the things what they are going to buy or going for shopping, then they didn't.', you can say 'Some people with a sharp memory don't feel the need to make lists because they can remember what to buy.'

例: It depends on the person's nature. Some people with a sharp memory don't feel the need to make lists because they can remember what to buy. However, those who are forgetful or have short-term memory issues usually find lists helpful.

提案: Your answer is clear but can be more fluent and natural. Avoid filler words like 'uh' and improve sentence structure. Use linking words to connect ideas. For example, instead of 'because in shopping center it's very, very noisy and crowded to use mobile phones, I prefer to use a list of makeup paper.', you can say 'because shopping centers are often noisy and crowded, so I find it easier to use a paper list.'

例: When I go grocery shopping, I prefer to make a list on paper because shopping centers are often noisy and crowded, so I find it easier to use a paper list to choose items.

× If I'm going to grocery then obviously I make a list at home so that I can easily buy the things.

✓ If I'm going grocery shopping, then obviously I make a list at home so that I can easily buy the things.

The phrase 'going to grocery' is incorrect; it should be 'going grocery shopping' to correctly express the activity in present tense.

× But whenever I went for shopping, the clothes and socks or shoes I don't make a list.

✓ But whenever I go shopping for clothes, socks, or shoes, I don't make a list.

The sentence mixes past tense 'went' with present tense 'don't make'. It should consistently use present tense 'go' and 'don't make' to match the habitual action.

× I just.

✓ I just don't make a list for those items.

The sentence 'I just.' is incomplete and lacks a verb or object, making it a sentence structure error. Completing the sentence clarifies the meaning.

× No, I have not made any list for my work.

✓ No, I have not made any list of my work.

The preposition 'for' is less appropriate here; 'list of my work' better expresses the intended meaning.

× Rather to make list I usually prefer to go work and we have a work schedule and we all need to follow that work schedule.

✓ Rather than making a list, I usually prefer to go to work, and we have a work schedule that we all need to follow.

The sentence has pronoun and article errors; 'Rather to make list' should be 'Rather than making a list', and 'go work' should be 'go to work' for correct pronoun and preposition usage.

× It's depend upon the nature of the people.

✓ It depends upon the nature of the people.

The verb 'depend' should be in third person singular present tense 'depends' to agree with the singular subject 'It'.

× If people have a sharp mind, if they can remember the things what they are going to buy or going for shopping, then they didn't.

✓ If people have a sharp mind, if they can remember the things they are going to buy or going shopping, then they don't.

The phrase 'then they didn't' is incorrect; it should be 'then they don't' to maintain present tense and correct pronoun usage.

× If a persons are forgettable or short term memory loss then they should need to make a list.

✓ If a person is forgetful or has short-term memory loss, then they should make a list.

'Persons' should be singular 'person', 'forgettable' should be 'forgetful', and 'should need to make' is redundant; 'should make' is correct.

× If I go, if I'm going to do grocery shopping, then I prefer to make a list on paper, uh, because in shopping center it's very, very noisy and crowded to use mobile phones, I prefer to use a list of makeup paper.

✓ If I go grocery shopping, then I prefer to make a list on paper because the shopping center is very noisy and crowded, so I prefer to use a list made on paper.

The phrase 'to do grocery shopping' is better as 'go grocery shopping'; 'in shopping center' should be 'the shopping center'; 'a list of makeup paper' is incorrect and should be 'a list made on paper'.