List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tự nhiên và hiệu quả, nhưng có một lỗi nhỏ về từ lặp lại "the the" và câu hơi dài. Bạn nên tránh lặp từ và chia câu dài thành các câu ngắn hơn để rõ ràng hơn.

例: Yes, I make a list when I shop. It helps me navigate the shopping experience and pick out only the things I need, avoiding items that would hurt my budget.

提案: Bạn nên tránh sử dụng từ ngữ không cần thiết như "uh" và câu hơi dài, gây khó hiểu. Hãy sử dụng các liên từ để câu mạch lạc hơn và tránh lặp từ.

例: Yes, I make a list for work, especially the day before important tasks. It helps me avoid procrastination and stay focused to achieve my goals.

提案: Câu trả lời có lỗi ngữ pháp và cấu trúc không rõ ràng. Bạn nên sửa lỗi và dùng các liên từ để câu trôi chảy hơn, đồng thời tránh dùng đại từ không chính xác như "I'm" thay vì "making a list".

例: I think making a list usually overwhelms some people because they see too many tasks. Therefore, they prefer to focus on one thing at a time and start another only after finishing the first.

提案: Bạn nên tránh dùng từ ngữ không cần thiết như "uh" và sửa lỗi ngữ pháp như "I refer making" thành "I prefer making". Ngoài ra, câu nên rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn với các liên từ phù hợp.

例: I prefer making lists on my phone because it offers many benefits. For example, you can set notifications and use a virtual assistant to remind you of tasks.

× It helps me to navigate through the shopping experience and helps me pick out the the things that I need, not the things that would leave a dent in my budget.

✓ It helps me to navigate through the shopping experience and helps me pick out the things that I need, not the things that would leave a dent in my budget.

The phrase 'the the things' contains a repeated article 'the', which is a typographical error. Removing the duplicate 'the' corrects the sentence. This is a common mistake and does not affect singular/plural form but is related to article usage.

× I think because I'm making a list usually makes overwhelm them with the things that they need to do.

✓ I think making a list usually overwhelms them with the things that they need to do.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'I'm making a list' and 'makes overwhelm them'. The subject should be 'making a list' which is singular, so the verb should be 'overwhelms'. Also, 'makes overwhelm' is incorrect; 'overwhelms' alone suffices. The pronoun 'them' is correct here as it refers to 'some people'.

× I refer making a list on my phone because of many benefits that it gives.

✓ I prefer making a list on my phone because of the many benefits that it gives.

The verb 'refer' is incorrect here; the correct verb is 'prefer'. Also, 'because of many benefits' should be 'because of the many benefits' to correctly use the definite article with plural countable nouns. This correction addresses both verb choice and article usage.

× Uh, for example, uh, making a list on your phone. You can also adding notifications on when you want to do something and also have an assistant.

✓ Uh, for example, making a list on your phone allows you to also add notifications for when you want to do something and also have an assistant.

The phrase 'You can also adding' is incorrect because after modal verb 'can', the base form of the verb should be used, not the '-ing' form. Changing 'adding' to 'add' corrects the verb form. Also, the sentence is restructured for clarity and grammatical correctness.