List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains redundancy. Try to be more concise and directly answer the question with a clear topic sentence, followed by a brief explanation. Avoid repeating words and ensure your sentences are grammatically correct.

例: No, I don't usually make a list when I shop because I only buy a few items at a time. I prefer to go to the market and pick what I need spontaneously.

提案: Your answer lacks clarity and coherence. Start with a clear topic sentence, then explain your situation with supporting details using linking words. Avoid filler words and incomplete sentences.

例: No, I don't make lists for my work because my job doesn't involve specific tasks. Therefore, I haven't tried using lists and can't say if they would be helpful.

提案: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to express your ideas clearly with correct grammar and use linking words to connect your thoughts logically. Provide specific reasons or examples to support your opinion.

例: Some people might not like making lists because they find it time-consuming or prefer to remember tasks mentally. Also, they might have fewer responsibilities, so lists seem unnecessary to them.

提案: Your answer is mostly clear but contains some awkward phrasing and redundancy. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and avoid contradictory statements. Make sure your sentences are complete and grammatically correct.

例: I usually prefer to make lists on my phone because it is practical and always with me. Using my phone is more convenient than paper lists, which I might lose or forget.

× No, I don't make a list when I am when I shop because I don't make big, big shopping or whatever I do.

✓ No, I don't make a list when I shop because I don't do big shopping or whatever I do.

The phrase 'I am when I shop' is incorrect and redundant. The correct form is 'when I shop' to indicate the time of the action. Also, 'make big, big shopping' is incorrect; the verb 'do' is used with 'shopping' as an uncountable noun. The sentence should be simplified for clarity.

× No, I don't make any list for my work. I don't have any tasks in my job and because of that I never make and yeah I don't know it's works or not.

✓ No, I don't make any list for my work. I don't have any tasks in my job, and because of that, I never make one. Yeah, I don't know if it works or not.

The phrase 'I never make and yeah I don't know it's works or not' is incomplete and confusing. 'Make' needs an object, so 'make one' is appropriate. Also, 'it's works' is incorrect; it should be 'if it works' to express uncertainty.

× I don't know why some people likes making lease but maybe they have many words to do and have a lot of time.

✓ I don't know why some people like making lists, but maybe they have many words to do and have a lot of time.

The verb 'likes' does not agree with the plural subject 'people'; it should be 'like'. Also, 'making lease' is likely a typo for 'making lists'. The phrase 'many words to do' is unclear and may need rephrasing, but it is outside the scope of the grammar problem list.

× And yeah maybe they do a list and it's helps to to make.

✓ And yeah, maybe they make a list and it helps to do things.

'Do a list' is incorrect; the correct verb is 'make a list'. Also, 'it's helps' is incorrect; it should be 'it helps'. The phrase 'helps to to make' is unclear and likely a mistake.

× I usually prefer to make a list on my phone because it's practical and my phone is always to me and yeah, it's very inconvenient for me.

✓ I usually prefer to make a list on my phone because it's practical and my phone is always with me, and yeah, it's very convenient for me.

The preposition 'to' is incorrect in 'my phone is always to me'; the correct preposition is 'with'. Also, 'it's very inconvenient for me' contradicts the intended meaning; it should be 'convenient'.