List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is generally clear but could be more concise and natural. Avoid redundancy like "go from grocery shopping" and improve sentence structure for better flow. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

例: I don't usually make lists when I shop, but for groceries or household expenses, I do prepare a list to stay organized and avoid forgetting items.

提案: Your answer has some hesitation and repetition. Try to avoid filler words like 'uh' and use linking words to connect ideas. Also, clarify why the list doesn't work and how you manage your tasks effectively.

例: I try to make a to-do list for my work, but it often doesn't help me much. However, I prioritise and organise my tasks beforehand to stay focused and punctual.

提案: Good explanation with relevant vocabulary. To improve, avoid repetition ('they they') and use linking words to make your answer more coherent. Also, provide a brief example or reason to support your point.

例: Some people dislike making lists because they prefer to go with the flow. For instance, type B personalities are spontaneous and like to do things as they feel in the moment.

提案: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains hesitations and incomplete sentences. Avoid filler words and ensure your sentences are complete. Use linking words to contrast your preferences clearly.

例: When shopping, I prefer making lists on paper because it's easy to check and I don't risk losing it like my phone. However, for daily tasks, I use my phone since it's portable and convenient.

× I don't usually make lists when I shop, but whenever I go from grocery shopping or something for the house expenses I do make a list and be mindful before shopping.

✓ I don't usually make lists when I shop, but whenever I go grocery shopping or buy something for the house expenses, I do make a list and am mindful before shopping.

The phrase 'go from grocery shopping' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'go grocery shopping' where 'grocery shopping' acts as a verb phrase. Also, 'and be mindful' should be 'and am mindful' to maintain subject-verb agreement and correct verb form.

× I try to make a list or A to do list for my work, but it usually doesn't work. But I make sure I prioritise and organize things before working upon it so that I don't get cluttered or, uh, and I try to be as organized and punctual as possible.

✓ I try to make a list or a to-do list for my work, but it usually doesn't work. However, I make sure I prioritise and organise things before working on it so that I don't get cluttered, and I try to be as organised and punctual as possible.

The phrase 'working upon it' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'working on it'. Also, 'But' at the start of the second sentence is better replaced with 'However' for smoother conjunction. 'Organize' is corrected to 'organise' to maintain consistency with British English spelling used elsewhere.

× Maybe they want to go with the flow. This really explains the type B personality. It's because they they are spontaneous and they want to do whatever they want to do at the present moment.

✓ Maybe they want to go with the flow. This really explains type B personality. It's because they are spontaneous and want to do whatever they want to do at the present moment.

The repetition 'they they' is a typographical error and should be corrected to a single 'they'. Also, 'the type B personality' is better expressed as 'type B personality' without 'the' for general reference.

× While going for shopping, I like to make it on paper because it's very convenient for me to open it and check it out.

✓ While going shopping, I like to make it on paper because it's very convenient for me to open it and check it out.

The phrase 'going for shopping' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'going shopping' without the preposition 'for'.

× And I don't lose it while lose my phone while moving around.

✓ And I don't lose it like I lose my phone while moving around.

The original sentence is missing a conjunction and has a repeated 'while'. Adding 'like' clarifies the comparison, and removing the repeated 'while' improves sentence clarity.

× Uh, but my daily routine work or things I want to complete as in my agenda for the day, I would like to, uh, make the list on my phone, which is very portable and.

✓ But for my daily routine work or things I want to complete, as in my agenda for the day, I would like to make the list on my phone, which is very portable.

The original sentence is incomplete and has awkward phrasing. Reordering the sentence and removing filler words improves clarity and completeness.