List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答时语句不连贯，存在语法错误，且表达不够自然。建议练习完整句子表达，避免断句，使用连词使句子更流畅。

例: Yes, I often make a list before I go shopping to write down everything I need to buy.

提案: 回答缺乏连贯性，句子结构混乱，表达不清晰。建议练习用完整句子回答问题，并使用连接词使表达更连贯。

例: Yes, I usually make a list before I start work to organize the tasks I need to complete today.

提案: 表达不完整且重复，语法错误较多。建议用完整句子表达观点，并给出具体原因，使用连接词使句子更流畅。

例: I think some people don't like making lists because they feel it takes too much time and prefer to work spontaneously.

提案: 回答中断多，表达不清晰，且出现无关词汇。建议练习完整句子表达，避免无关内容，使用连接词使表达更自然。

例: I prefer to make lists on my phone because I can carry it anywhere, which is more convenient than using paper.

× Yes, I often do it. When I go to the shop, I before that I will make a list. To. Write down what I need to buy.

✓ Yes, I often do it. Before I go to the shop, I will make a list to write down what I need to buy.

原句语序混乱，句子断裂。应将时间状语提前，连接句子，使表达连贯。建议将“before I go to the shop”提前，合并“to write down what I need to buy”成完整句。

× Yes, I often do my work. Use the list. Why before I start work, I will. List what I need to do. Today.

✓ Yes, I often use a list for my work. Before I start work today, I will list what I need to do.

原句断句不完整，语序混乱。应将相关内容合并成完整句子，调整词序，使表达清晰。

× I think may. I think people have many choice. To. Choose whether make a list. One of the reason I think may be. They spend too much time.

✓ I think maybe people have many choices to choose whether to make a list. One of the reasons I think may be that they spend too much time.

原句中“may”用法不当，句子断裂，缺少连词和介词。应使用“maybe”表示可能性，补充连词“that”，并调整词序。

× I. I. Often. Make a list on. My phone because I often move to anywhere and my phone will follow me. But PayPal is too.

✓ I often make a list on my phone because I often move anywhere and my phone will follow me. But PayPal is too complicated.

原句断句严重，缺少谓语和完整表达。应合并断句，补充缺失内容，使句子完整通顺。