List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答表达了观点，但语法和用词不够准确，且有重复词汇。建议注意动词形式和句子结构，避免重复，同时可以用连接词使表达更流畅。

例: Actually, I seldom make a list when I go shopping because I find it troublesome. Instead, I prefer to have a flexible plan so that I can decide what to buy depending on the situation or any special offers.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清的问题，如“my time is very nervous”不合适。建议使用正确的表达方式，并且注意句子结构，使回答更自然。

例: No, I don't make a list for my work because my schedule is very tight. I think making strict plans makes me nervous, so I prefer to keep my schedule flexible.

提案: 回答语法错误较多，表达不清晰。建议简化句子结构，使用正确的语法和词汇，明确表达观点。

例: Some people don't like making lists because they find it time-consuming. However, lists can help them use their time more efficiently and organize their plans better.

提案: 回答中有重复词汇和不完整的句子，表达不清楚。建议注意句子完整性，避免重复，并使用恰当的词汇。

例: Actually, I prefer to make lists on my phone because I can access them anywhere and anytime. Making lists on paper is limited and less convenient.

× I prefer make a flexible plan so that I can decide decide what to buy depend on the situation or special offer.

✓ I prefer making a flexible plan so that I can decide what to buy depending on the situation or special offer.

动词prefer后面应接动名词形式making，而不是动词原形make。动词depend后应使用现在分词depending来表示根据情况。

× I think make plans will nervous me and I prefer to have flexible plan to make my times more flexible.

✓ I think making plans will make me nervous and I prefer to have a flexible plan to make my time more flexible.

动词think后应接动名词making而不是动词原形make。动词make后应接宾语me，且形容词nervous不能作动词使用。名词time应为单数形式。

× I think make plans will nervous me and I prefer to have flexible plan to make my times more flexible.

✓ I think making plans will make me nervous and I prefer to have a flexible plan to make my time more flexible.

名词plan前应加冠词a，表示单数。time应为单数形式，表示时间。

× Oh, because making list is a very have every advantage for them because they can use their time more efficient and and get a good plan.

✓ Oh, because making lists has every advantage for them because they can use their time more efficiently and get a good plan.

名词list应为复数lists，表示泛指。动词have应改为第三人称单数形式has。形容词efficient应改为副词efficiently修饰动词use。

× Oh, because making list is a very have every advantage for them because they can use their time more efficient and and get a good plan.

✓ Oh, because making lists has every advantage for them because they can use their time more efficiently and get a good plan.

动词use后应使用副词more efficiently修饰。

× Actually I prefer to make a list on my phone because I can I can eat it anywhere and anytime.

✓ Actually I prefer to make a list on my phone because I can access it anywhere and anytime.

动词eat用在此处不合适，应使用access表示访问。

× Uh, make make list in paper is very limited and I should.

✓ Uh, making lists on paper is very limited and I shouldn't.

名词list应为复数lists，表示泛指。动词make应改为动名词making。介词on paper更合适。句尾应完整表达否定含义。