List— Part 1 採点レポート
会話
Part 1
試験官
Do you make a list when you shop?
受験者
Uh, yes, definitely. Uh, I'm an organization person in the well, I was, I want to go shopping. I always make a list of what I'm going to buy and what is the aim of going shopping.
試験官
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
受験者
Yeah, definitely. I always make a plan for my studying. And of course, I think making plan is the best way to practice myself, discipline. And of course, I always followed by discipline. Yeah. And as time goes fast and yeah, I realized that myself, discipline has been changed.
試験官
Why don't some people like making lists?
受験者
Maybe I guess that kind of person is too lazy and they don't have enough self-discipline. And I get that this kind of person are, yeah, think that is so complex and complicated for the daily routine.
試験官
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
受験者
Yeah, I honestly I prefer to use my cell phone because it's so convenient. I can just use my WeChat and send my message to myself and of course this way can efficiently and quickly to remain what I gonna do next.
評価
総合
Part 1
Do you make a list when you shop?
スコア: 60.0提案: 回答时语言不够自然流畅，存在语法和表达错误，且内容重复冗长。建议简化句子结构，直接回答问题，并补充具体细节。
例: Yes, I always make a shopping list because it helps me remember what I need and saves time. For example, last week I bought all the ingredients for a cake by following my list.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
スコア: 55.0提案: 回答缺乏连贯性，语法错误较多，表达不清晰。建议使用连词连接句子，明确表达观点，并举例说明。
例: Yes, I always make a study plan because it helps me stay disciplined. For instance, I set daily goals and follow them strictly, which improves my learning efficiency.
Why don't some people like making lists?
スコア: 50.0提案: 回答中有语法错误且表达不够礼貌，建议避免使用负面词汇，改用更客观的表达，并提供具体原因。
例: Some people may avoid making lists because they find it time-consuming or prefer to be spontaneous in their daily activities.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
スコア: 65.0提案: 回答较为自然，但存在语法和表达不准确的问题。建议简化句子，使用正确的时态和表达方式。
例: I prefer making lists on my phone because it's convenient. For example, I use WeChat to send notes to myself, which helps me remember tasks quickly.
文法
× I always make a plan for my studying.
✓ I always make plans for my studying.
这里的 'plan' 应该用复数形式，因为通常学习计划不止一个，使用复数更符合习惯表达。
× I think making plan is the best way to practice myself, discipline.
✓ I think making plans is the best way to practice self-discipline.
'practice myself, discipline' 结构不正确，应该用 'practice self-discipline'，即练习自律。这里 'myself' 用错了，应该用名词短语 'self-discipline'。
× And of course, I always followed by discipline.
✓ And of course, I always follow discipline.
句子中 'followed' 是过去式，但句意表达的是习惯性动作，应该用一般现在时 'follow'。
× And as time goes fast and yeah, I realized that myself, discipline has been changed.
✓ And as time goes fast, I realize that my self-discipline has changed.
'realized' 是过去式，但前半句用的是现在时 'goes'，时态不一致，应该统一用现在时 'realize'。另外 'myself, discipline' 应改为 'my self-discipline'。
× I get that this kind of person are, yeah, think that is so complex and complicated for the daily routine.
✓ I get that this kind of person is, yeah, thinking that it is so complex and complicated for the daily routine.
'this kind of person' 是单数，谓语动词应使用单数 'is'。另外 'think' 应改为现在分词 'thinking' 以符合句子结构。
× I can just use my WeChat and send my message to myself and of course this way can efficiently and quickly to remain what I gonna do next.
✓ I can just use my WeChat and send messages to myself, and of course this way can efficiently and quickly remind me what I'm going to do next.
'remain' 用错，正确动词是 'remind'，表示提醒。'my message' 应改为复数 'messages' 更自然。'gonna' 是口语，应改为正式表达 'going to'。此外，'to remain' 结构错误，应去掉 'to'。
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