List— Part 1 採点レポート
会話
Part 1
試験官
Do you make a list when you shop?
受験者
Actually yes, I make a shopping list because it helps me to save both money and time. Also not to forget about necessary items and not to buy unnecessary products.
試験官
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
受験者
Yes, I usually make a list for my work because it helps me stay organized and focused. For example, by listing tasks in order of priority, I can manage my time more efficiently and avoid forgetting important duties.
試験官
Why don't some people like making lists?
受験者
In my opinion, they don't consider it as a good structure and they think it might waste their time.
試験官
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
受験者
I prefer to make a list on my phone because in my opinion it's much faster and more convenient.
評価
総合
Part 1
Do you make a list when you shop?
スコア: 85.0提案: Ответ хороший, но можно сделать его более естественным и связным, используя связующие слова и избегая повторов. Например, вместо "Also not to forget... and not to buy..." лучше сказать "so I don't forget necessary items and avoid buying unnecessary products."
例: Yes, I usually make a shopping list because it helps me save both money and time, so I don't forget necessary items and avoid buying unnecessary products.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
スコア: 90.0提案: Ответ хороший, но можно добавить связующее слово для плавности, например, "For instance" вместо "For example". Также можно немного разнообразить лексику.
例: Yes, I usually make a list for my work because it helps me stay organized and focused. For instance, by prioritizing tasks, I can manage my time more efficiently and avoid forgetting important duties.
Why don't some people like making lists?
スコア: 75.0提案: Ответ можно улучшить, сделав его более естественным и расширенным. Например, использовать связующие слова и более точные выражения, а также объяснить мнение подробнее.
例: In my opinion, some people dislike making lists because they don't see it as an effective way to organize their tasks, and they believe it might waste their time.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
スコア: 80.0提案: Ответ можно сделать более связным и естественным, используя связующие слова и более разнообразную лексику. Например, "I prefer making lists on my phone since it's faster and more convenient."
例: I prefer making lists on my phone since it's faster and more convenient than using paper.
文法
× Actually yes, I make a shopping list because it helps me to save both money and time. Also not to forget about necessary items and not to buy unnecessary products.
✓ Actually yes, I make a shopping list because it helps me save both money and time. Also, it helps me not to forget necessary items and not to buy unnecessary products.
The phrase 'helps me to save' is grammatically correct but the infinitive 'to' is often omitted after 'help' in English for smoother flow. Also, the original sentence lacks a subject in the second part ('Also not to forget...'), which makes it incomplete. Adding 'it helps me' clarifies the meaning and corrects the sentence structure.
× In my opinion, they don't consider it as a good structure and they think it might waste their time.
✓ In my opinion, they don't consider it a good structure and they think it might waste their time.
The verb 'consider' is followed directly by the object without the preposition 'as'. Using 'consider it as' is incorrect in standard English. Therefore, removing 'as' corrects the sentence.
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