List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不够自然，且内容重复。建议简化句子结构，避免使用“like”来举例，增加具体细节，使表达更流畅自然。

例: Yes, I usually make a shopping list to ensure I don't forget essential items like onions and other daily necessities.

提案: 回答表达不够清晰，语法和用词有误。建议使用更准确的表达方式，清楚说明原因，并避免重复。

例: No, I don't make lists for work because I used to, but I still forgot some tasks or steps, so I decided it's not effective for me.

提案: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不连贯。建议使用完整句子，明确表达观点，并用连接词使句子更流畅。

例: I don't like making lists because I believe it's better to start working immediately rather than spending time writing everything down, which can be time-consuming.

提案: 回答较为自然，但存在语法错误和表达不够准确。建议注意时态和句子结构，使用更准确的表达。

例: I prefer making lists on my phone because it can remind me of upcoming events, like a meeting, 30 minutes in advance, which is more convenient than using paper.

× Uh, yes I will because if I do not make a list, I'll forget what I want for my daily life.

✓ Uh, yes I do because if I do not make a list, I'll forget what I want for my daily life.

这里的回答是关于习惯性动作，应该使用一般现在时的助动词'do'，而不是将来时的'wil'。

× So to make sure I remember everything which is necessary, I will make a list about like the thoughts, like the onions, like that.

✓ So to make sure I remember everything which is necessary, I will make a list of things like onions and so on.

介词'about'用法不当，应该用'list of'来表示列出某些东西。

× No I don't. It's just because I used to do it, but I found it doesn't work because even if the list has passed on my workplace, I still forget some of them or some of the steps.

✓ No, I don't. It's just because I used to do it, but I found it doesn't work because even if the list is passed on at my workplace, I still forget some of them or some of the steps.

这里时态和介词使用不当，'has passed'应改为一般现在时被动语态'is passed'，'on my workplace'应改为'at my workplace'。

× No I don't. It's just because I used to do it, but I found it doesn't work because even if the list has passed on my workplace, I still forget some of them or some of the steps.

✓ No, I don't. It's just because I used to do it, but I found it doesn't work because even if the list is passed on at my workplace, I still forget some of them or some of the steps.

介词'on my workplace'用法错误，正确用法是'at my workplace'。

× And I am one of them because I think starting doing this job immediately is better than this did.

✓ And I am one of them because I think starting doing this job immediately is better than doing this.

代词'this did'用法错误，应使用动名词短语'doing this'来表达比较。

× I think it's more it's more costly on the time.

✓ I think it costs more time.

表达时间消耗时，'costly on the time'不正确，应直接说'costs more time'。

× I like to make a list on my phone because my phone could remind me if the if some of the events come.

✓ I like to make a list on my phone because my phone could remind me if some of the events come.

句中多余的介词短语'the if'应删除，保持句子简洁。

× Like if I going, I'm going to a meeting and the meeting would remind me before 30 minutes.

✓ Like if I am going, I'm going to a meeting and the meeting would remind me 30 minutes before.

动词短语缺少助动词'am'，'before 30 minutes'的词序应调整为'30 minutes before'。

× So I think it's more convenient than in paper.

✓ So I think it's more convenient than on paper.

介词'in paper'用法错误，正确用法是'on paper'。