List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答表达了主要意思，但语法和用词不够准确，句子结构较复杂且有重复。建议简化句子结构，注意时态一致，并使用更自然的表达方式。

例: Yes, I usually make a shopping list on my phone because I tend to forget items. I add things I need to buy and check them off as I pick them up.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和重复用词，表达不够流畅。建议注意动词时态和单复数形式，避免重复，并用连接词使句子更连贯。

例: Yes, I divide my to-do list into four parts based on urgency and importance. This helps me focus on important tasks first and postpone less urgent ones, keeping my work organized.

提案: 回答内容较好，但表达略显口语化且有语法错误。建议减少口头语，使用更准确的表达，并用连接词增强逻辑性。

例: I think some people dislike making lists because they prefer a flexible lifestyle. For example, a friend of mine adjusts his plans based on his mood, allowing him to change his schedule freely.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题。建议使用正确的时态和人称，避免直译，表达更自然流畅。

例: I prefer making lists on my phone because it's more convenient and portable. I add important tasks and delete them once completed.

× Making a list is my style as I usually forget something when I was shopping, so I usually use my phone application to note down something that I need to buy and pay and delete the line after I picking each of the items.

✓ Making a list is my style as I usually forget something when I am shopping, so I usually use my phone application to note down something that I need to buy and pay and delete the line after I pick each of the items.

这里的时间状语是现在时态的习惯动作，不能用过去时"was shopping"，应使用现在进行时"am shopping"。另外，"after I picking"中动词形式错误，应为动词原形"pick"。

× Yes, I divided my To Do List to to four parts with respect to the urgency and importance.

✓ Yes, I divide my To Do List into four parts with respect to the urgency and importance.

回答中描述的是习惯性动作，应使用一般现在时"divide"，而非过去时"divided"。另外，介词应为"into"而非"to"。

× Yes, I divided my To Do List to to four parts with respect to the urgency and importance.

✓ Yes, I divide my To Do List into four parts with respect to the urgency and importance.

介词"to to"重复且错误，正确用法是"divide ... into ..."，表示把某物分成若干部分。

× Therefore I can choose choose to do something that really important for me and leave those less important later.

✓ Therefore I can choose to do something that is really important for me and leave those less important ones for later.

"really important"前缺少系动词"is"，使句子完整。"choose choose"重复，应去掉一个。"less important"后应加名词或代词，如"ones"，使表达完整。

× Therefore I can choose choose to do something that really important for me and leave those less important later.

✓ Therefore I can choose to do something that is really important for me and leave those less important ones for later.

"leave those less important later"中缺少介词"for"，正确表达应为"leave those less important ones for later"，表示留待以后处理。

× Uh, for example one of my friends, he likes to do something, just depends on what he's thinking at that time so he can adjust his schedule freely.

✓ Uh, for example, one of my friends likes to do something just depending on what he's thinking at that time so he can adjust his schedule freely.

"he likes"前面已有主语"one of my friends"，不需要重复"he"。"just depends"应改为"just depending"，使句子结构更自然。

× Making a paper is the past tense nowadays.

✓ Making a paper list is outdated nowadays.

"Making a paper is the past tense"表达不准确，"past tense"是语法术语，不能用来形容事物过时。应改为"is outdated"或"is a thing of the past"。

× I usually prefer you make a list on my mobile phone as the application makes it portable.

✓ I usually prefer to make a list on my mobile phone as the application makes it portable.

"prefer you make"结构错误，应为"prefer to make"，表示我更喜欢做某事。

× I note some important To Do List on my phone and delete them after finishing it.

✓ I note some important To Do List items on my phone and delete them after finishing them.

"To Do List"是不可数名词，需加复数形式"items"。"delete them after finishing it"中"it"指代不明，应改为"them"，与前文复数呼应。