List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答有些重复和语法错误，建议简化句子结构，避免重复词汇，并且用更自然的表达方式。例如，可以直接说明做购物清单的好处，并用连接词使句子更连贯。

例: Yes, I always make a shopping list because it helps me choose items easily and saves time. Moreover, it ensures I don't forget anything important.

提案: 回答中有重复和语法错误，建议使用更准确的表达，如“check the items”而非重复“check the check the”。同时，使用连接词使句子更流畅。

例: Yes, I always make a work list because it helps me keep track of tasks. I use a digital app to cross out each task once it's completed, which is very effective.

提案: 回答表达不够清晰，有重复和语法错误。建议用更简洁的句子表达观点，并用连接词连接原因和结果。

例: Some people dislike making lists because they find it complicated and time-consuming. Also, they prefer the freedom to buy whatever they want without restrictions.

提案: 回答不完整且有重复，建议完整表达理由，避免重复词汇，并用连接词使句子连贯。

例: I prefer making lists on paper because it helps me see my tasks clearly. Writing by hand also makes me remember better than using my phone.

× Yes, I always make a list when I go shopping because I think it's easy for me to to do to choose anything and the list can save my time and I need to pay more attention to to my list of goods.

✓ Yes, I always make a list when I go shopping because I think it's easy for me to choose anything and the list can save my time and I need to pay more attention to my list of goods.

The phrase 'to to do to choose' contains redundant 'to' and an unnecessary verb 'do'. The correct form is 'to choose' after 'easy for me'. Also, 'to to my list' has a repeated preposition 'to'. Removing the extra 'to' improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Yes, I always make a list for my work. I think it's very important for me because I can check the check the items when I do it. I use digital app when I finish the one task I just crossed out.

✓ Yes, I always make a list for my work. I think it's very important for me because I can check the items when I do it. I use a digital app; when I finish one task, I just cross it out.

The phrase 'check the check the items' repeats 'check the' unnecessarily. Also, 'I just crossed out' should be in present tense 'I just cross it out' to match the habitual action. Adding 'a' before 'digital app' is necessary for correct article usage.

× I think maybe they think it's very complicated, complicated one, it was time. Maybe make a list will lose their interests because they want to get free, get freedom anyway, they want to do anything when they want to buy.

✓ I think maybe they find it very complicated and time-consuming. Maybe making a list will make them lose interest because they want to be free and do anything they want when they shop.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. 'Complicated one, it was time' is incorrect and confusing. 'Make a list will lose their interests' is ungrammatical; it should be 'making a list will make them lose interest'. Also, 'get free, get freedom' is better expressed as 'be free'. The correction improves clarity and grammatical structure.

× I prefer to make a list on paper because I think I can know the I can I can know clearly what I do and when I write the list on paper I I can.

✓ I prefer to make a list on paper because I think I can clearly know what I need to do, and when I write the list on paper, I can remember better.

The original sentence has repeated phrases 'I can I can know' and is incomplete at the end. 'Know clearly what I do' is vague; 'know clearly what I need to do' is clearer. Completing the sentence with 'I can remember better' provides a logical conclusion. Removing repetitions and completing the thought improves grammar and clarity.