List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is generally clear and relevant, but there are some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing that affect naturalness and clarity. Try to use correct verb forms and avoid redundancy. Also, keep your sentences concise and coherent by using linking words properly.

例: Yes, I usually make a list before I go shopping because it helps me stay organized and ensures I don't forget important items. For example, when I shop for groceries, having a list saves time and prevents me from buying unnecessary things.

提案: Your answer is relevant and structured, but there are minor grammatical mistakes and a typo ('making a little'). To improve, use correct verb forms and check for typos. Also, try to use linking words like 'therefore' or 'thus' to connect ideas smoothly.

例: Yes, I usually make a list for my work because it helps me stay organized and focused. For example, by listing tasks in order of priority, I can manage my time more efficiently and avoid forgetting important duties. Therefore, making a list definitely improves my productivity.

提案: Your answer lacks clarity and contains several unclear phrases and grammatical errors. To improve, use clear and complete sentences, avoid vague words like 'perch' and 'flux', and provide specific reasons with proper linking words.

例: Some people dislike making lists because they find them restrictive and prefer to organize their tasks more spontaneously. Additionally, making lists can cause unnecessary pressure or stress, which makes their day feel more rigid and less flexible.

提案: Your answer is mostly clear and relevant, but the phrase 'helps me stay all night' is unclear and awkward. Try to use more precise expressions and avoid ambiguous phrases. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

例: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it's more convenient and accessible. For instance, I can quickly add or delete items anytime without worrying about losing a paper list. Also, since I always have my phone with me, I can check my list whenever I need to.

× For example, when I shop for groceries, I having a list saving time and prevent me from buying accessory things.

✓ For example, when I shop for groceries, I have a list to save time and prevent me from buying accessory things.

The phrase 'I having a list saving time' is incorrect because 'having' is not properly used here. The correct form is 'I have a list' followed by an infinitive phrase 'to save time' to express purpose.

× Overall, making a little definitely improve my productivity.

✓ Overall, making a list definitely improves my productivity.

The sentence lacks the modal verb agreement and correct noun. 'Making a little' is incorrect; it should be 'making a list'. Also, the verb 'improve' should be in third person singular form 'improves' to agree with the singular subject 'making a list'.

× Some people dislike making lists because they find it restrictive and prefer more spontaneous perch to organize their tasks.

✓ Some people dislike making lists because they find it restrictive and prefer a more spontaneous approach to organizing their tasks.

The word 'perch' is incorrect here; the correct word is 'approach'. Also, 'to organize' should be 'to organizing' to correctly follow 'approach'.

× Additionally, some may feel unnecessary pressure or stress making their day free.

✓ Additionally, some may feel unnecessary pressure or stress in making their day free.

The preposition 'in' is needed before 'making their day free' to correctly link the phrase to the feeling of pressure or stress.

× More rigid. For example, they might feel flux.

✓ They might feel more rigid. For example, they might feel a sense of flux.

The original sentences are fragments and unclear. Combining them and adding 'a sense of' before 'flux' clarifies the meaning and corrects the sentence structure.

× Also, using my phone helps me stay all night since I always have it with me.

✓ Also, using my phone helps me stay organized all night since I always have it with me.

The phrase 'stay all night' is incomplete and unclear. Adding 'organized' clarifies the intended meaning. The quantifier 'all night' is acceptable but needs a complement.