List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答が不自然で文法的に誤りが多いです。質問に対して直接的に答え、簡潔で明確な文章を心がけましょう。例えば、"No, I usually don't make a list when I shop because I prefer to buy things spontaneously."のように答えると良いです。

例: No, I usually don't make a list when I shop because I prefer to buy things spontaneously. However, sometimes I make a list if I need specific items.

提案: 文法と表現が不自然で、質問に対する答えが明確ではありません。仕事の内容に関連して、なぜリストが必要ないのかを具体的に説明しましょう。例えば、"No, I don't make lists for my work because as a train conductor, my tasks are scheduled and managed by the company."のように答えると良いです。

例: No, I don't make lists for my work because as a train conductor, my tasks are scheduled and managed by the company, so I don't need to make lists.

提案: 回答が不完全で意味が伝わりにくいです。理由を明確に述べ、具体的な説明を加えましょう。例えば、"Some people don't like making lists because they find it restrictive and prefer to remember things naturally."のように答えると良いです。

例: Some people don't like making lists because they find it restrictive and prefer to remember things naturally. Also, they might feel lists are time-consuming to prepare.

提案: 回答が意味不明で、質問に答えていません。紙か携帯電話のどちらでリストを作るかを明確に答え、その理由を具体的に説明しましょう。例えば、"I prefer to make lists on my phone because it's convenient and I can easily edit them."のように答えると良いです。

例: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it's convenient and I can easily edit them. Plus, I always have my phone with me, so I won't forget the list.

× No, I did. I usually go to the shop, go to the shop with no lists. I I used to. Buy us something.

✓ No, I don't. I usually go to the shop without a list. I used to buy something.

The student incorrectly used 'did' to answer a present tense question and fragmented sentences. The question is in present tense, so the answer should also be in present tense. Also, 'buy us something' is unclear and fragmented; it should be 'buy something'. Suggestions: Use present tense to match the question and complete sentences properly.

× No, I didn't. So my work is a train conductor so. It's no need.

✓ No, I don't. My work is as a train conductor, so there is no need.

The student used past tense 'didn't' to answer a present tense question and incorrect sentence structure 'It's no need'. The correct modal expression is 'there is no need'. Suggestions: Use present tense to match the question and use correct modal verb expressions.

× I think because. Everyone, always. Forget something? So in order to.

✓ I think it's because everyone always forgets something, so they don't make lists.

The original sentence is fragmented and incomplete, making it hard to understand. The student needs to form complete sentences with proper subject-verb agreement and logical flow. Suggestions: Combine fragments into complete sentences and use correct verb forms.

× I prefer to make a list and fun because fun is a. Very useful and might bring fun.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone because it is very useful and might be fun.

The student incorrectly used 'and fun' and 'fun is a' which are ungrammatical. Also, the preposition 'on' is needed with 'make a list on my phone'. Suggestions: Use correct prepositions and complete sentences to express the idea clearly.