List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答表达了基本意思，但语法和用词不够准确，句子结构较为混乱。建议注意时态和句子连贯性，避免重复表达。

例: Yes, I usually make a shopping list, especially when I go to the supermarket. It helps me remember what I need to buy and makes shopping more efficient.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误，如'mix a list'不合适，且句子结构不够清晰。建议使用正确表达并增加连接词使句子更流畅。

例: Yes, I usually make a list for my work because it helps me manage my time and decide which tasks to prioritize.

提案: 回答内容与问题不符，表达混乱且语法错误较多。建议理解问题后，给出明确原因，并用连词连接句子。

例: Some people don't like making lists because they find it restrictive and prefer to work more spontaneously.

提案: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清的问题，建议使用完整句子并清楚说明理由。

例: I prefer to make lists on my phone because I can easily add or delete items and keep my list updated.

× Usually I make at least one night shop, especially when I go to the supermarket.

✓ Usually I make at least one night shopping trip, especially when I go to the supermarket.

night shop 是单复数错误，应该用night shopping trip表示“夜间购物”，night shop不合适。

× I will list what I want to buy and then I will buy something from the list that is very convenient.

✓ I will list what I want to buy and then I will buy things from the list; that is very convenient.

something用在这里不合适，应该用things表示多项物品。

× I usually mix a list for my work because the list could help me to manage time and could help me decide which one should I do first.

✓ I usually make a list for my work because the list can help me manage time and help me decide which one I should do first.

mix a list用法错误，应该用make a list。could help改为can help更符合语境。which one should I do first语序错误，正确语序是which one I should do first。

× Because the schedule could help people to manage their time and avoid to spending lost time and also someone want to do accomplish their work more often.

✓ Because the schedule can help people manage their time and avoid spending lost time, and also some people want to accomplish their work more often.

avoid后面不接to，应该直接用动名词spending。someone用法不当，应该用some people。do accomplish重复，去掉do。

× I prefer make a list on my phone because on my I can set up an open and I can change it when I delete some new things.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone because on my phone I can set it up and I can change it when I add or delete some new things.

prefer后面应该接to do形式。on my后面缺少名词phone。set up an open不合适，改为set it up。delete some new things不合逻辑，改为add or delete some new things更合理。