List— Part 1 採点レポート
会話
Part 1
試験官
Do you make a list when you shop?
受験者
Yes, of course. I usually make a list when I shop because I don't want to make other expenses when I go into shop and it can save more money when I make a list.
試験官
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
受験者
Yes, I made lots of lists for my work because I have umm, sorry, as a student I have lots of exams so I have to study lots of subject subjects, so I need to make a list and it works because I'm studying very effectively.
試験官
Why don't some people like making lists?
受験者
Because they are quite casual and they don't like make a list and follow the rules. Maybe they want to just do anything they want.
試験官
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
受験者
OK so in my opinion I prefer to make a list in paper, big on paper because when I use my phone I will distraction. So I prefer to make a list on paper.
評価
総合
Part 1
Do you make a list when you shop?
スコア: 70.0提案: 你的回答有點重複，建議可以更自然且精簡地表達，避免重複說明同一件事。例如，可以先直接回答問題，再用一兩句話說明原因。
例: Yes, I always make a shopping list to avoid unnecessary expenses and save money.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
スコア: 65.0提案: 回答中有語法錯誤和重複，建議先直接回答問題，然後用清楚的句子說明原因，並避免口語填充詞。
例: Yes, I make many lists for my studies because I have many subjects to prepare for exams. It helps me study more effectively.
Why don't some people like making lists?
スコア: 60.0提案: 回答中語法不正確且表達不夠自然，建議使用更正確的句型和連接詞，使回答更流暢且有邏輯。
例: Some people dislike making lists because they prefer to be casual and spontaneous, rather than following strict plans.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
スコア: 65.0提案: 回答中有語法錯誤和重複，建議簡潔明確地表達意見，並使用連接詞使句子更流暢。
例: I prefer making lists on paper because using my phone distracts me, so paper helps me focus better.
文法
× I don't want to make other expenses when I go into shop and it can save more money when I make a list.
✓ I don't want to make other expenses when I go shopping and it can save more money when I make a list.
The phrase 'go into shop' is incorrect; the correct form is 'go shopping' which uses the verb + -ing form to indicate the activity of shopping.
× I have to study lots of subject subjects, so I need to make a list and it works because I'm studying very effectively.
✓ I have to study lots of subjects, so I need to make a list and it works because I'm studying very effectively.
The word 'subject' should be plural 'subjects' because 'lots of' indicates more than one, so the noun must be plural.
× Because they are quite casual and they don't like make a list and follow the rules.
✓ Because they are quite casual and they don't like to make a list and follow the rules.
After 'don't like', the verb should be in the infinitive form 'to make' rather than the base form 'make'.
× OK so in my opinion I prefer to make a list in paper, big on paper because when I use my phone I will distraction.
✓ OK so in my opinion I prefer to make a list on paper, big on paper because when I use my phone I get distracted.
The correct preposition with 'paper' is 'on paper', not 'in paper'. Also, 'I will distraction' is incorrect; it should be 'I get distracted' to express the effect of using the phone.
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