List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is somewhat natural but a bit repetitive and lacks clear structure. Try to start with a direct response to the question, then add specific reasons or examples using linking words to improve coherence. Avoid filler phrases like 'you know?'.

例: I don't usually make a shopping list because I don't shop often. However, when I travel, I always prepare a list to ensure I don't forget anything important. For example, my mother always makes a list before shopping, which helps her stay organised.

提案: Your answer is understandable but contains grammatical errors and unclear phrasing. Try to organise your ideas clearly with correct grammar and use linking words to connect your points. Also, avoid repeating words unnecessarily.

例: I am currently a student, so I don't have a job. I often make study lists to organise my tasks. Although I sometimes struggle to complete everything on the list, I find that making lists helps me stay focused and manage my time better.

提案: Your answer lacks clarity and contains awkward phrasing. Try to express your ideas more clearly and use linking words to connect your reasons. Also, provide more specific reasons why some people dislike making lists.

例: Some people dislike making lists because they feel it wastes time and prefer to do tasks spontaneously. However, I believe lists are useful since they help prevent forgetting important tasks. Therefore, I recommend everyone to try making lists.

提案: Your answer is confusing and contradictory. Try to clearly state your preference and support it with reasons. Avoid contradicting yourself and use linking words to organise your ideas logically.

例: I prefer making lists on paper because I tend to get distracted by my phone when I use it. Writing on paper helps me focus better and control my tasks. Although some people find phone lists convenient, I find paper lists more effective for me.

× I don't often go shopping and I will make a list when I go out to travel and my mom always makes a list when she shops.

✓ I don't often go shopping and I make a list when I go out to travel, and my mom always makes a list when she shops.

The sentence mixes present simple and future tense incorrectly. Since the action of making a list when going out to travel is habitual, present simple 'make' is appropriate instead of 'will make'. This maintains tense consistency and clarity.

× I just didn't seems to done all the work that I made because I'm not really good at making a list and doing things but it's good to make a list.

✓ I just didn't seem to do all the work that I made because I'm not really good at making a list and doing things, but it's good to make a list.

The verb 'seems' should be in base form 'seem' after 'didn't' because 'did' already indicates past tense. Also, 'done' should be 'do' as the base verb after 'seem to'. This corrects the past tense usage and verb form.

× Maybe the thing making a list wastes time and after they done a thing they will check it.

✓ Maybe making a list wastes time, and after they have done a thing, they will check it.

The phrase 'after they done a thing' is incorrect; it should be 'after they have done a thing' to use the present perfect tense correctly, indicating completion before checking.

× I prefer making a list on the paper because I always play a phone when I do my homework and I suggest everyone should make a list on papers because I know they control themselves well and at some point.

✓ I prefer making a list on paper because I always play on my phone when I do my homework, and I suggest everyone should make a list on paper because I know they control themselves well at some point.

The preposition 'on' is unnecessary before 'paper' in this context; 'on paper' is the correct phrase. Also, 'play a phone' is incorrect; it should be 'play on my phone'. Additionally, 'on papers' should be 'on paper' as 'paper' is uncountable here.

× But making lists on phones is better. No, it's not so better at making on paper.

✓ But making lists on phones is better. No, it's not better than making them on paper.

The phrase 'not so better' is incorrect; the correct comparative form is 'not better than'. Also, 'at making on paper' is awkward; it should be 'than making them on paper' for clarity and correctness.