List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Jawaban Anda kurang jelas dan tidak alami. Cobalah untuk memberikan jawaban yang langsung dan lengkap dengan struktur yang benar, serta hindari kata-kata yang tidak relevan atau membingungkan.

例: Yes, I usually make a shopping list before I go to the store to help me remember what I need to buy.

提案: Jawaban Anda kurang terstruktur dan sulit dipahami. Gunakan kalimat yang jelas dan lengkap, serta tambahkan detail yang mendukung dengan menggunakan kata penghubung yang tepat.

例: Yes, I usually make a to-do list for my work. It helps me stay organized and complete my tasks on time.

提案: Jawaban Anda tidak relevan dan tidak jelas. Cobalah untuk menjawab langsung dengan alasan yang logis dan gunakan kalimat yang lengkap dan mudah dimengerti.

例: Some people don't like making lists because they find it time-consuming or prefer to remember tasks mentally.

提案: Jawaban Anda tidak jelas dan tidak lengkap. Berikan jawaban yang langsung dan jelaskan alasan preferensi Anda dengan kalimat yang terstruktur dan mudah dipahami.

例: I prefer to make lists on paper because it's easier to write quickly, but sometimes I use my phone when I'm away from home.

× Yes, I usually. Please my Doo Doo shoe like this my list.

✓ Yes, I usually do. Please see my to-do list like this.

The original sentence lacks a main verb and has unclear phrasing. Adding 'do' completes the sentence, and rephrasing clarifies the meaning.

× Yes, I usually list my to do work. Sometimes I see my to do my list job every day for my.

✓ Yes, I usually list my to-do work. Sometimes I check my to-do list every day.

The original sentence misuses pronouns and has redundant words. Correcting pronouns and simplifying improves clarity.

× Because with making leaves, we can we can on time and we can manage the time with good and.

✓ Because by making lists, we can be on time and manage our time well.

The original sentence has incorrect conjunctions and unclear phrases. Replacing 'leaves' with 'lists' and correcting conjunctions improves meaning.

× OK, I prefer to make a list on paper and my phone in bath. In bath because I can, I can.

✓ OK, I prefer to make a list on paper and on my phone in both because I can.

The original sentence is incomplete and unclear. Completing the sentence and correcting prepositions clarifies the meaning.