List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn cần rõ ràng và tự nhiên hơn. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh. Hãy thêm liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn và tránh lặp từ.

例: Yes, I always make a shopping list because it helps me buy only the necessary items and avoid wasting money on things I don't need.

提案: Bạn nên chú ý ngữ pháp và cấu trúc câu để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn. Tránh lặp từ và sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn.

例: Yes, I always make a list of my daily tasks because it helps me manage my time effectively and complete everything on schedule.

提案: Câu trả lời thiếu rõ ràng và có nhiều tiếng ừ, à không cần thiết. Bạn nên tránh dùng từ ngữ tiêu cực như 'lazy' và cố gắng trình bày ý kiến một cách mạch lạc, có liên kết.

例: Some people might not like making lists because they prefer to be spontaneous or find it difficult to organize their tasks in advance.

提案: Bạn nên tránh dùng từ ngữ không trang trọng như 'So annoying' trong bài thi. Hãy sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và liên kết ý để câu trả lời tự nhiên và hiệu quả hơn.

例: I prefer to make lists on my phone because I always have it with me, whereas carrying paper lists can be inconvenient.

× What is the necessary item I need to buy when I go to a market because I don't want to waste my money in the unnecessary item.

✓ What are the necessary items I need to buy when I go to the market because I don't want to waste my money on unnecessary items.

The sentence incorrectly uses singular 'item' where plural 'items' is appropriate because it refers to multiple things to buy. Also, 'a market' should be 'the market' for specificity, and 'in the unnecessary item' should be 'on unnecessary items' to correctly use the preposition and plural form.

× What is the necessary item I need to buy when I go to a market because I don't want to waste my money in the unnecessary item.

✓ What are the necessary items I need to buy when I go to the market because I don't want to waste my money on unnecessary items.

The preposition 'in' is incorrectly used with 'waste my money'; the correct preposition is 'on' when referring to spending or wasting money on something.

× Yeah, I make a always make a list of what I need to do in a day because I it's helped me to have enough time to complete each task I must do.

✓ Yeah, I always make a list of what I need to do in a day because it helps me to have enough time to complete each task I must do.

The phrase 'make a always make a list' is incorrect; 'always' should come before the verb 'make'. Also, 'it's helped me' should be 'it helps me' to match the present tense context.

× Yeah, I make a always make a list of what I need to do in a day because I it's helped me to have enough time to complete each task I must do.

✓ Yeah, I always make a list of what I need to do in a day because it helps me to have enough time to complete each task I must do.

The pronoun 'I' before 'it's helped me' is unnecessary and causes confusion; it should be removed to correctly say 'because it helps me'.

× I think it's because they're lazy. Uh, they, umm, start the day with, uh, they don't know what to do and they just do anything. They, uh, uh, have an idea of it.

✓ I think it's because they're lazy. They start the day without knowing what to do and just do anything. They don't have a clear idea.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. 'Start the day with' is incomplete; it should be 'start the day without knowing what to do'. Also, 'have an idea of it' is vague; 'have a clear idea' is clearer. Removing filler words improves clarity.

× I prefer to make a list on my phone because I always take my phone by my side, but it is very inconvenient to carry a paper everywhere you go.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone because I always take my phone by my side, but it is very inconvenient to carry paper everywhere you go.

The article 'a' before 'paper' is incorrect because 'paper' in this context is uncountable; it should be used without an article.