List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is generally clear and relevant, but there are some unnatural phrases and minor grammar mistakes. For example, "if I go in with that without a wish" is unclear and should be corrected. Try to use more natural expressions and avoid redundancy. Also, keep your answer concise within 5 sentences.

例: Yes, I always make a list when I go shopping, especially for groceries. It helps me remember everything I need to buy and prevents me from forgetting important items.

提案: Your answer addresses the question but contains some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing, such as "get run into". Try to use correct verb forms and clearer expressions. Also, adding linking words can improve coherence.

例: Yes, I usually make a list before starting work because it helps me plan ahead and avoid obstacles that I might encounter otherwise.

提案: Your answer is brief and the phrase "They want to expect the unexpected" is a bit unclear and unnatural. Try to explain more clearly why some people avoid making lists, and use linking words to connect your ideas.

例: In my opinion, some people prefer not to make lists because they find it more convenient to be flexible and spontaneous. They enjoy dealing with things as they come rather than following a fixed plan.

提案: Your answer has several grammatical errors and unnatural expressions, such as "I'm gonna bring by phone me" and "tick it off behind the little box". Try to use correct sentence structures and clearer vocabulary. Also, avoid redundancy and keep your answer concise.

例: I prefer making lists on my phone because I always carry it with me. Unlike paper lists, which can get damaged, digital lists are easy to update and I can tick off items quickly without needing a pen.

× It helps me remember things that I have to buy because if I go in with that without a wish, it's highly likely for me to forget the things that I need to buy.

✓ It helps me remember things that I have to buy because if I go in with that without a list, it's highly likely for me to forget the things that I need to buy.

The original sentence uses 'wish' incorrectly; the correct noun should be 'list' to match the context. This is a vocabulary error rather than a grammar problem, so no correction under the given grammar problem types is needed here.

× I like making a list before working.

✓ I like making a list before I work.

The phrase 'before working' is a gerund phrase that can be ambiguous. Using 'before I work' clarifies the timing and fits better with the sentence structure. This correction aligns with proper verb form usage.

× It helps me plan ahead and avoid any other obstacles that I might get run into if I didn't have a list.

✓ It helps me plan ahead and avoid any other obstacles that I might run into if I didn't have a list.

The phrase 'get run into' is incorrect; the correct form is 'run into' as a phrasal verb meaning to encounter. 'Get' is unnecessary and incorrect here.

× They want to expect the unexpected.

✓ They want to expect the unexpected.

This sentence is grammatically correct; no preposition error is present.

× I find it more convenient to make a list in my phone because I'm gonna bring by phone me everywhere I go.

✓ I find it more convenient to make a list on my phone because I bring my phone with me everywhere I go.

The preposition 'in' is incorrect when referring to using a phone; 'on my phone' is correct. Also, the phrase 'bring by phone me' is incorrect; it should be 'bring my phone with me' to correctly express possession and movement.

× As for a paper, it could easily get destroyed so having it on my phone helps me track easily.

✓ As for paper, it could easily get destroyed so having it on my phone helps me track easily.

The article 'a' before 'paper' is incorrect because 'paper' here is uncountable. Removing 'a' corrects the usage.

× Also I can tick it off behind the little box whereas with paper I have to bring me a pen with me also.

✓ Also, I can tick it off in the little box whereas with paper I have to bring a pen with me as well.

The preposition 'behind' is incorrect; 'in the little box' is the correct phrase to indicate marking a checkbox. Also, 'bring me a pen with me' is incorrect; it should be 'bring a pen with me'. Adding 'as well' is more natural than 'also' at the end.