List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is generally clear and relevant, but it contains some redundancy and minor grammatical errors. Try to avoid repeating words (e.g., "make make") and improve sentence structure for natural flow. Also, be concise and avoid filler phrases like "That's a nice question because."

例: I didn't use to make lists when shopping, but now I always prepare one before going to the store because it helps me control my spending and shop more efficiently.

提案: Your answer addresses the question but lacks clarity and contains repetition ("wherever wherever"). Try to use clearer sentence structures and avoid repeating words. Also, provide a more direct response about whether making lists works or not.

例: I don't usually make lists for work because I am familiar with my duties. Instead, I focus on helping wherever I am needed throughout the day.

提案: Your answer is relevant but could be improved by avoiding vague phrases like "I do not have more information" and by using linking words to connect ideas smoothly. Also, try to be more specific about reasons why some people dislike making lists.

例: Some people dislike making lists because they find it boring or time-consuming, while others enjoy the organization it provides. Personally, I think making lists is helpful for staying focused.

提案: Your answer is clear but could be more concise and natural. Avoid awkward phrases like "I don't use really much" and clarify your example. Use linking words to improve coherence.

例: I prefer making lists on my phone because it's always with me and easy to access. Unlike pen and paper, my phone lets me update lists anytime, which is very convenient.

× That's a nice question because where earlier I was not used to do that, but now I really make make a list before going to Superstore or any store because I think I spend too much money on when I go there.

✓ That's a nice question because earlier I was not used to doing that, but now I really make a list before going to the Superstore or any store because I think I spend too much money when I go there.

The phrase 'used to do' should be 'used to doing' because after 'used to' when expressing a habit or past routine, the verb should be in the gerund (-ing) form. Also, 'make make' is a repetition error and should be corrected to a single 'make'. Additionally, 'on when I go there' is incorrect; 'on' should be removed for correct sentence structure.

× That's a nice question because where earlier I was not used to do that, but now I really make make a list before going to Superstore or any store because I think I spend too much money on when I go there.

✓ That's a nice question because earlier I was not used to doing that, but now I really make a list before going to the Superstore or any store because I think I spend too much money when I go there.

The word 'Superstore' is a common noun here and should be preceded by the definite article 'the' to specify a particular store. So, 'to Superstore' should be 'to the Superstore'.

× So making a list before going to the store is a really nice idea.

✓ So making a list before going to the store is a really good idea.

While 'nice' is not grammatically incorrect, 'good idea' is a more natural collocation in English when expressing approval of an action or plan.

× I do not make any list for my work because I usually know what to do and what are my duties and job role over there on my work.

✓ I do not make any lists for my work because I usually know what to do and what my duties and job roles are at my work.

'List' should be plural 'lists' because it refers to any number of lists in general. Also, 'job role' should be plural 'job roles' to match 'duties' and maintain parallel structure. The phrase 'over there on my work' is awkward; 'at my work' is more appropriate.

× So I just go with the flow and do wherever wherever my help is needed.

✓ So I just go with the flow and do whatever work my help is needed for.

The phrase 'do wherever wherever my help is needed' is ungrammatical and repetitive. It should be rephrased to 'do whatever work my help is needed for' to convey the intended meaning clearly.

× So I just help on work.

✓ So I just help at work.

The preposition 'on' is incorrect here; the correct preposition to indicate location or context is 'at'.

× I do not have more information that why they don't like it, but personally I believe it's a good idea to make a list before doing whatever.

✓ I do not have much information about why they don't like it, but personally I believe it's a good idea to make a list before doing anything.

'More information that why' is incorrect; it should be 'much information about why'. Also, 'whatever' is vague here; 'anything' is more appropriate in this context.

× I prefer to make a list on my phone because it's accessible and I always carry my phone everywhere I go.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone because it's accessible and I always carry my phone with me everywhere I go.

The phrase 'carry my phone everywhere I go' is understandable but adding 'with me' clarifies the action and is more natural in English.

× I think the pen and paper I don't use really much and it's not accessible easily.

✓ I think I don't really use pen and paper much and it's not easily accessible.

The original sentence has awkward word order and quantifier placement. 'Don't use really much' should be 'don't really use ... much'. Also, 'not accessible easily' should be 'not easily accessible' for correct adverb placement.

× For example, I carry my phone everywhere I go on Word.

✓ For example, I carry my phone everywhere I go to use Word.

The phrase 'on Word' is unclear and ungrammatical. It should be rephrased to 'to use Word' to indicate the purpose of carrying the phone.