List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is understandable but a bit repetitive and lacks coherence. Try to use linking words and avoid redundancy. Also, use more natural phrases like 'shopping list' instead of 'list when I go to shop'.

例: Yes, I always make a shopping list because it helps me remember what I need to buy and prevents me from forgetting anything important.

提案: Your answer is incomplete and unclear at the end. Try to finish your sentences and use linking words to organize your ideas clearly. Also, provide specific reasons or examples.

例: Yes, I make a to-do list for my work because it helps me stay organized. For example, it reminds me of my tasks and ensures I don't miss any important deadlines.

提案: Try to avoid filler words like 'uh' and 'umm'. Also, use correct grammar and clearer expressions. For example, say 'they want to work freely without boundaries' instead of 'work in a freeway'.

例: In my opinion, some people dislike making lists because they prefer a flexible lifestyle and don't want to be restricted by strict routines.

提案: Your answer is somewhat unclear and incomplete at the end. Try to use linking words and complete your thoughts. Also, use natural phrases like 'I always carry my phone with me'.

例: I use both paper and phone for making lists, but I usually prefer my phone because I always carry it with me, so I can check my list anytime.

× Certainly, I prefer to make a list when I go for shopping because it gives me a clear vision what I need to purchase and I don't forget to buy anything so that I like to list when I go to shop.

✓ Certainly, I prefer to make a list when I go shopping because it gives me a clear vision of what I need to purchase and I don't forget to buy anything, so I like to make a list when I go shopping.

The phrase 'go for shopping' is incorrect; the correct form is 'go shopping' which uses the verb + -ing form without 'for'. Also, 'like to list' is incomplete; it should be 'like to make a list'. Additionally, 'vision what I need' needs the preposition 'of' to be correct.

× Certainly, I prefer to make a list when I go for shopping because it gives me a clear vision what I need to purchase and I don't forget to buy anything so that I like to list when I go to shop.

✓ Certainly, I prefer to make a list when I go shopping because it gives me a clear vision of what I need to purchase and I don't forget to buy anything, so I like to make a list when I go shopping.

The phrase 'a clear vision what I need' is missing the preposition 'of' after 'vision'. The correct phrase is 'a clear vision of what I need'. Also, 'go to shop' should be 'go shopping' for natural usage.

× Absolutely. I prefer to make a list of my work because it helps me in various way. First of all, it always reminds me what to do and what not to do and secondly I can do.

✓ Absolutely. I prefer to make a list of my work because it helps me in various ways. First of all, it always reminds me what to do and what not to do, and secondly, I can do it.

The phrase 'various way' should be plural 'various ways' because 'various' implies more than one. Also, the sentence 'secondly I can do' is incomplete and needs an object, so 'I can do it' is correct.

× Absolutely. I prefer to make a list of my work because it helps me in various way. First of all, it always reminds me what to do and what not to do and secondly I can do.

✓ Absolutely. I prefer to make a list of my work because it helps me in various ways. First of all, it always reminds me what to do and what not to do, and secondly, I can do it.

The pronoun 'I can do' is incomplete without an object. Adding 'it' clarifies what the speaker can do, making the sentence grammatically correct.

× Uh, well, umm, I would say in my perspective, uh, people, uh, don't like to make list because they don't prefer a routine life.

✓ Uh, well, umm, I would say from my perspective, uh, people, uh, don't like to make lists because they don't prefer a routine life.

The phrase 'make list' is missing the plural form; it should be 'make lists' because people generally make multiple lists. Also, 'in my perspective' is better expressed as 'from my perspective'.

× Uh, well, umm, I would say in my perspective, uh, people, uh, don't like to make list because they don't prefer a routine life.

✓ Uh, well, umm, I would say from my perspective, uh, people, uh, don't like to make lists because they don't prefer a routine life.

The preposition 'in' is incorrect with 'perspective'; the correct preposition is 'from' as in 'from my perspective'.

× They were want to work in a freeway and they don't want a boundaries to create.

✓ They want to work in a free way and they don't want boundaries to be created.

'They were want' is incorrect; it should be 'they want'. Also, 'a freeway' is incorrect in this context; 'a free way' or 'freely' is better. 'A boundaries' is incorrect because 'boundaries' is plural and does not take 'a'. The phrase 'to create' should be passive 'to be created' to match the meaning.

× They were want to work in a freeway and they don't want a boundaries to create.

✓ They want to work in a free way and they don't want boundaries to be created.

The phrase 'work in a freeway' is incorrect; it should be 'work in a free way' meaning 'freely'. Also, 'a boundaries' is incorrect because 'boundaries' is plural and does not take the article 'a'.

× Easily I do both, I make list in my phone as well as in paper.

✓ I easily do both; I make lists on my phone as well as on paper.

'Make list' should be plural 'make lists' because it refers to multiple lists. Also, the prepositions 'in my phone' and 'in paper' are incorrect; the correct preposition is 'on' for devices and paper.

× Easily I do both, I make list in my phone as well as in paper.

✓ I easily do both; I make lists on my phone as well as on paper.

The preposition 'in' is incorrect when referring to making lists on a phone or paper; the correct preposition is 'on'.

× But most of the time I prefer to do my list in my phone because I carry it always and it I can't leave it in my home so it always helps me to.

✓ But most of the time I prefer to make my list on my phone because I always carry it and I can't leave it at home, so it always helps me.

The phrase 'do my list' is incorrect; it should be 'make my list'. 'In my phone' should be 'on my phone'. 'Carry it always' is better as 'always carry it'. 'Leave it in my home' should be 'leave it at home'. The sentence ending 'helps me to' is incomplete and should be 'helps me'.