List— Part 1 採点レポート
会話
Part 1
試験官
Do you make a list when you shop?
受験者
Yes, I make a list when I'm shopping. I think making a list helps me organize and I think it's very important. If I don't have a list, I might forget something important like books, water, water, milk and bread.
試験官
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
受験者
Yes, I make a list for my work. You know, I'm a lawyer, I have to deal with a lot of paperwork and making a list helps me to address the important tasks and make sure I don't forget anything important. I think it's really useful and helpful.
試験官
Why don't some people like making lists?
受験者
I personally like making lists. I think some people dislike making lists simply because they found it unnecessary and time consuming. For example, one of my colleagues doesn't like making lists simply because she find it.
試験官
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
受験者
I prepare to make a list on my phone because, you know, with my iPhone it's really convenient. And sometimes I didn't carry a paper with me, but I always carry my iPhone with me, so it's very convenient.
評価
総合
Part 1
Do you make a list when you shop?
スコア: 75.0提案: 回答较为自然，但存在重复词汇（如重复的“water”），且内容稍显简单。建议避免重复，丰富细节，使用连接词使表达更流畅。
例: Yes, I always make a shopping list because it helps me stay organized. For instance, without a list, I might forget essential items like milk and bread. Therefore, making a list ensures I buy everything I need efficiently.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
スコア: 80.0提案: 回答结构清晰，内容具体，但语言略显重复（如“important tasks”与“anything important”）。建议使用更多同义词和连接词提升表达丰富度。
例: Yes, as a lawyer, I create lists to manage my numerous tasks effectively. This method helps me prioritize urgent paperwork and ensures nothing is overlooked, which is extremely beneficial for my work efficiency.
Why don't some people like making lists?
スコア: 65.0提案: 回答不完整，句子未结束且表达不够清晰。建议完整表达观点，避免语法错误，并提供具体例子。
例: I enjoy making lists, but some people avoid them because they consider the process unnecessary and time-consuming. For example, one of my colleagues prefers to rely on memory rather than writing things down.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
スコア: 70.0提案: 回答表达有些重复，时态使用不当（如“didn't carry”应为“don't carry”）。建议注意时态一致，避免重复，并使用连接词使表达更连贯。
例: I prefer making lists on my phone because it's very convenient. Since I always carry my iPhone, I can easily access my lists anytime, unlike paper lists which I might forget to bring.
文法
× For example, one of my colleagues doesn't like making lists simply because she find it.
✓ For example, one of my colleagues doesn't like making lists simply because she finds it.
这里主语是第三人称单数（she），谓语动词find应加-s，变为finds，表示第三人称单数形式。
× And sometimes I didn't carry a paper with me, but I always carry my iPhone with me, so it's very convenient.
✓ And sometimes I don't carry a paper with me, but I always carry my iPhone with me, so it's very convenient.
句子描述的是习惯性动作，应该用一般现在时，不能用过去时didn't carry，应改为don't carry。
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