List— Part 1 採点レポート
会話
Part 1
試験官
Do you make a list when you shop?
受験者
Yes, I make a list when I shop and I think it is really convenient for me because you don't need to make more time in searching for what you need.
試験官
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
受験者
Yes, I often make a list for my work. It can help me get more efficient in my work items and I can get the important.
試験官
Why don't some people like making lists?
受験者
I think some people don't like make a list because making list is more complex. If you anything to make a list, you will feel many tasks that you should do and.
試験官
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
受験者
I like to make a list in my phone because in the social I think phone is very convenient. Is a very convenient way. But in the paper you may have some you don't need.
評価
総合
Part 1
Do you make a list when you shop?
スコア: 70.0提案: 回答时应避免使用泛泛的表达，如“you don't need to make more time”，应更具体地说明列清单如何节省时间或提高效率。同时，句子结构可以更自然流畅。
例: Yes, I always make a shopping list because it helps me save time by allowing me to quickly find everything I need without wandering around the store.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
スコア: 60.0提案: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不完整，建议使用完整句子并具体说明清单如何提高工作效率。
例: Yes, I often make a to-do list for my work because it helps me prioritize tasks and complete important assignments more efficiently.
Why don't some people like making lists?
スコア: 50.0提案: 回答不完整且语法错误较多，表达不清晰。建议使用完整句子，明确说明原因，并避免语法错误。
例: I think some people dislike making lists because it can feel complicated and overwhelming, reminding them of many tasks they have to complete.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
スコア: 55.0提案: 回答重复且表达不清晰，建议简洁明了地说明偏好并给出具体理由，避免重复和模糊表达。
例: I prefer making lists on my phone because it's more convenient and I can easily edit or delete items, unlike paper lists which can be messy or unnecessary.
文法
× I think some people don't like make a list because making list is more complex.
✓ I think some people don't like making a list because making a list is more complex.
动词后面接动名词时，动词需要加 -ing 形式。这里 'like' 后面应该接 'making' 而不是 'make'。
× making list is more complex.
✓ making a list is more complex.
名词 'list' 是可数名词，单数形式前需要加冠词 'a'。
× If you anything to make a list, you will feel many tasks that you should do and.
✓ If you have anything to make a list, you will feel many tasks that you should do.
句中缺少动词 'have'，且 'anything' 前需要动词。
× If you anything to make a list, you will feel many tasks that you should do and.
✓ If you have anything to make a list, you will feel many tasks that you should do.
句子结构不完整，缺少动词，且结尾多余 'and'，需要删除。
× I like to make a list in my phone because in the social I think phone is very convenient.
✓ I like to make a list on my phone because I think the phone is very convenient.
表示使用电子设备时，应该用介词 'on' 而不是 'in'。另外，'in the social' 语义不清，应删除或改正。
× Is a very convenient way.
✓ It is a very convenient way.
句子缺少主语，应加上 'It'。
× But in the paper you may have some you don't need.
✓ But on paper, you may have some things you don't need.
'in the paper' 应改为 'on paper'，且 'some' 后应加名词 'things'。
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