List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Jawaban Anda terlalu singkat dan kurang menjelaskan. Cobalah untuk memberikan kalimat topik yang jelas dan menambahkan detail pendukung agar jawaban lebih lengkap dan alami.

例: Yes, I usually make a list when I shop because it helps me remember everything I need and saves time.

提案: Jawaban Anda kurang jelas dan tidak terstruktur dengan baik. Gunakan kalimat yang lebih lengkap dan jelaskan bagaimana daftar tersebut membantu pekerjaan Anda.

例: Yes, I make a list for my work, and it works well because it helps me organize my tasks and ensures I don't forget important duties.

提案: Jawaban Anda tidak jelas dan tidak menggunakan kosakata yang tepat. Cobalah untuk memberikan alasan yang spesifik dan gunakan kalimat yang lengkap.

例: Some people don't like making lists because they find them too complicated or time-consuming.

提案: Jawaban Anda kurang jelas dan tidak lengkap. Jelaskan preferensi Anda dengan alasan yang spesifik dan gunakan kalimat yang lebih alami.

例: I prefer to make a list on my phone because it's more convenient and I can easily edit it whenever I need to.

× Because bushy, maybe.

✓ Because it is busy, maybe.

The word 'bushy' is an adjective describing something covered with bushes, which does not fit the context. The intended meaning is likely 'busy,' an adjective describing a state of being occupied. Also, the sentence lacks a subject and verb, so adding 'it is' makes the sentence grammatically correct.

× In my phone because practice.

✓ On my phone because it's convenient.

The preposition 'in' is incorrect when referring to using a phone; 'on' is the correct preposition. Also, the phrase 'because practice' is incomplete and unclear. Adding 'because it's convenient' clarifies the reason and completes the sentence.