List— Part 1 採点レポート
会話
Part 1
試験官
Do you make a list when you shop?
受験者
Yes I do. I always make lists before shopping. In this way I can be clear about what I need to buy and it prevents me from forgetting something.
試験官
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
受験者
Yes, I do make a list for my work. In this way I can know what I need to do in everyday life. It works well because through the list I can make my task on time and have a regular lifestyle.
試験官
Why don't some people like making lists?
受験者
Because some people are lazy, they want to do something maybe what they want in their spare time. They don't want to be organised and this may let them feel relaxed, so they don't like to making lists.
試験官
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
受験者
I prefer to make a list on the paper because when I write write down the things I need to do, this can let me remember them deeply and this can let me feel more formal and I can feel a sense of achievement when I finish them.
評価
総合
Part 1
Do you make a list when you shop?
スコア: 85.0提案: 你的回答表达清晰且结构合理，但可以使用更多连接词使句子更流畅，例如使用“because”或“so”。此外，可以增加具体细节来丰富内容，比如举例说明你如何制定购物清单。
例: Yes, I always make a list before shopping because it helps me remember everything I need. For example, last week I wrote down all the ingredients for a recipe, so I didn't forget anything at the store.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
スコア: 80.0提案: 回答中表达了观点，但句子结构较简单，且部分表达不够地道。建议使用更自然的表达方式，并增加连接词使内容更连贯，同时提供更具体的例子。
例: Yes, I make a list for my work every day because it helps me prioritize tasks. For instance, by following my list, I can complete assignments on time and maintain a balanced daily routine.
Why don't some people like making lists?
スコア: 65.0提案: 回答中有语法错误和表达不自然的问题，且用词较为简单。建议避免使用“lazy”这样可能带有负面评价的词汇，改用更中性表达，并注意语法正确性。
例: Some people prefer not to make lists because they want to enjoy their free time without feeling restricted. They might find lists too organized and prefer a more relaxed approach to their tasks.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
スコア: 75.0提案: 回答中有重复词汇和表达不够简洁的问题。建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并使用更自然的表达方式，同时可以增加具体原因说明。
例: I prefer making lists on paper because writing things down helps me remember better. Also, crossing off completed tasks gives me a sense of accomplishment.
文法
× so they don't like to making lists.
✓ so they don't like to make lists.
动词不定式to后面应接动词原形，而不是动名词形式making。这里应使用to make。
× I prefer to make a list on the paper because when I write write down the things I need to do, this can let me remember them deeply and this can let me feel more formal and I can feel a sense of achievement when I finish them.
✓ I prefer to make a list on paper because when I write down the things I need to do, this can let me remember them deeply and this can let me feel more formal and I can feel a sense of achievement when I finish them.
在表达“在纸上”时，通常不加定冠词the，直接用on paper。加the paper会让句子显得不自然。
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