List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答时语法和表达不够自然，句子结构较简单且有语法错误。建议使用更自然的表达方式，并避免重复。

例: Yes, I usually make a shopping list before I go because it helps me remember exactly what I need to buy.

提案: 回答中有很多语法错误和口语填充词，表达不清晰。建议简洁明了地回答问题，并使用连贯的句子。

例: Yes, I often make a list of my tasks for work. It helps me organize my schedule and save time.

提案: 回答语法混乱，表达不清楚。建议用简单明了的句子说明原因，并避免重复和语法错误。

例: Some people don't like making lists because they think it wastes time, especially if their plans often change.

提案: 回答中有语法错误和表达不流畅的问题。建议使用正确的时态和连贯的句子表达观点。

例: I prefer making lists on my phone because it's convenient and I can access it anytime. Paper lists are easy to lose.

× I like making a list before going shopping because I think making a list can let me understand that what I need.

✓ I like making a list before going shopping because I think making a list can help me understand what I need.

这里“can let me understand”表达不自然，应该用“can help me understand”更符合英语习惯，表示“帮助我理解”。

× I often mail it before I studies.

✓ I often mail it before I study.

主语是第一人称单数“I”，动词应使用原形“study”，而不是第三人称单数形式“studies”。

× I for example, I need to uh, make a list for my uh, task, uh, in a date and help me to save time to study.

✓ For example, I need to make a list for my tasks on a date to help me save time to study.

句子结构混乱，重复使用“I”，且“in a date”应为“on a date”，“help me to save”中“to”可省略，整体调整使句子更通顺。

× Because they may be faint is a waste their time because I they need to spend time to make a list.

✓ Because they may feel it is a waste of their time since they need to spend time making a list.

“may be faint”用词错误，应为“may feel”；“a waste their time”缺少介词“of”；“because I they”是错误的代词使用，应改为“since they”。

× Sometimes they maybe have some change for their jobs so they don't like to make a list to.

✓ Sometimes they may have some changes in their jobs, so they don't like to make a list too.

“maybe”应为“may be”；“change”应为复数“changes”；“for their jobs”应改为“in their jobs”；“to”应为“too”，表示“也”。

× I prefer to making a list on my phone because I think it is convenient for me.

✓ I prefer making a list on my phone because I think it is convenient for me.

“prefer to making”结构错误，动词“prefer”后面直接接动名词“making”，不需要“to”。

× But I made a list on papers.

✓ But I make a list on paper.

根据上下文，表达的是习惯动作，应使用一般现在时“make”，且“papers”应为不可数名词“paper”。

× The papers. Easy to forget those.

✓ Paper is easy to forget.

“The papers”用法不当，且句子缺少主语和谓语，改为“Paper is easy to forget”更完整且符合语法。