List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is generally clear but contains some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing, such as "prevents of forgetting". Try to use more natural expressions and correct grammar. Also, avoid redundancy by combining ideas more smoothly.

例: Yes, I usually make a list when I shop because I tend to forget items otherwise. Especially when I have many things to buy, writing a list helps me remember everything efficiently.

提案: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical mistakes, such as "parental for getting any tiny item" which is confusing. Try to express your ideas more clearly and use correct sentence structures. Also, provide specific examples to support your answer.

例: Yes, I always make a list for my work to ensure I complete all my tasks. For example, I write down each duty so I don't forget any important details during the day.

提案: Your answer is well-structured and clear. To improve, try to use more varied vocabulary and linking words to enhance coherence. Also, avoid starting with a single word like "Lists."

例: I believe some people dislike making lists because it takes time and effort. For example, they might feel that writing tasks down wastes time. Moreover, some prefer to be spontaneous and enjoy the freedom of not planning everything beforehand.

提案: Your answer is mostly clear but contains a typo "lease" instead of "list" and some minor awkward phrasing. Try to proofread your answers and use precise vocabulary. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

例: I prefer to make my to-do lists on my phone because it's convenient and I can access it anywhere. For instance, I can quickly add or delete tasks without worrying about losing a paper list.

× it prevents of forgetting what I want to buy

✓ it prevents me from forgetting what I want to buy

The verb 'prevent' is followed by the structure 'prevent someone from doing something'. The original sentence incorrectly uses 'prevents of' which is not correct. The correct preposition after 'prevent' is 'from', and the object pronoun 'me' is needed to indicate who is being prevented.

× I write a list to assure that I do every duty that are related to me and parental for getting any tiny item to do so, I write all tasks that I have

✓ I write a list to assure that I do every duty that is related to me and parental; for getting any tiny item to do so, I write all tasks that I have

The subject 'every duty' is singular, so the verb should be 'is' instead of 'are'. Also, the sentence is quite long and confusing; adding a semicolon helps separate ideas. The phrase 'parental for getting any tiny item to do so' is unclear but was left as is since it does not contain a clear grammar error from the list.