List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is clear and relevant, but try to avoid redundancy by combining similar ideas and using linking words for better flow. For example, instead of saying 'makes shopping very easy and faster', you could say 'makes shopping easier and faster'. Also, try to keep your answer concise within 3-4 sentences.

例: Yes, I always make a list because it helps me shop faster and stay within my budget. By quickly identifying what I need from the shelves, I avoid unnecessary purchases and save time.

提案: Your answer is too brief and does not fully address the question. You should provide a topic sentence and then add supporting details explaining how making a list helps you at work. Use linking words to connect your ideas.

例: Yes, I always make a list for my work because it helps me organise my tasks efficiently. For instance, it ensures I don't forget important duties and allows me to prioritise my workload effectively.

提案: Your answer shows good reasoning but is a bit long and ends abruptly. Try to complete your example and use linking words to make your answer more coherent. Also, avoid filler phrases like 'that's a difficult one'.

例: Some people dislike making lists because they feel it restricts their freedom. For example, they may prefer to work flexibly without feeling pressured to follow a strict plan.

提案: Your answer is relevant and clear but could be improved by avoiding repetition and using linking words to connect your ideas smoothly. Also, try to keep your answer concise and avoid filler words like 'on on on'.

例: I prefer making lists on my phone because it is easier to manage and edit. Moreover, carrying my phone is convenient, whereas paper lists can easily get lost.

× It makes shopping very easy and faster because then I am able to quickly identify what I need to buy from the shelves and it also helps me to stay within budget.

✓ It makes shopping very easy and faster because then I am able to quickly identify what I need to buy on the shelves and it also helps me to stay within budget.

The preposition 'from' is incorrectly used with 'buy' in this context. The correct preposition is 'on' when referring to items located on shelves. Using 'from' implies taking something away, but here the focus is on identifying items located on the shelves.

× If I use a paper I will most likely lose it and that is why I don't note down what I need to do or buy on on on the physical copy.

✓ If I use paper I will most likely lose it and that is why I don't note down what I need to do or buy on the physical copy.

The phrase 'use a paper' is incorrect because 'paper' in this context is an uncountable noun and does not require an article. Also, the repetition 'on on on' is a typographical error and should be corrected to a single 'on'. The correct phrase is 'use paper' and 'on the physical copy'.