List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Try to make your answers clearer and more structured. Start with a direct response, then add supporting details using linking words. Avoid repetition and grammatical errors to sound more natural.

例: No, I usually don't make a list when I go shopping because I tend to forget some products. However, I know it's important to have a list to avoid missing items.

提案: Focus on giving a clear and complete answer. Use linking words to explain why the list works and avoid unclear phrases. Practice simple sentence structures to improve clarity.

例: Yes, I make a list for my work because it helps me organize my tasks. It works well since my manager can see my progress and I can prioritize my duties.

提案: Try to use more precise vocabulary and connect your ideas smoothly with linking words. Also, avoid repeating similar ideas and focus on clear reasons.

例: Some people dislike making lists because it takes time and they often forget to check them. Additionally, they may lose the list, which makes it ineffective.

提案: Use correct grammar and linking words to make your answer coherent. Be specific about the advantages of each method and avoid repetition.

例: I prefer making lists on my phone because it's easier to check off items and remove them if needed. On the other hand, using paper requires a pen and can be less convenient.

× No, I don't make it, at least when I when I going to shop because that I usually forget some of the product.

✓ No, I don't make it, at least when I am going to shop because I usually forget some of the products.

The phrase 'when I going to shop' is incorrect because the verb 'go' needs to be in the present participle form with the auxiliary verb 'am' to form the present continuous tense. Also, 'some of the product' should be plural 'products' to match the context.

× We must, we I must buy it and I won't do that.

✓ We must buy it, and I won't do that.

The sentence is confusing and redundant. 'We must, we I must buy it' is incorrect; it should be simplified to 'We must buy it'. The modal verb 'must' is used correctly but the sentence structure needs correction for clarity.

× Yes, I prefer to making a list on my phone because it's easier for check or I did some product or or remove anything.

✓ Yes, I prefer to make a list on my phone because it's easier to check or add some products or remove anything.

After 'prefer to', the base form of the verb should be used, not the '-ing' form. Also, 'for check' should be 'to check', and 'did some product' is incorrect; it should be 'add some products' to make sense.

× In other hand if I do the making a list in paper I must find a pen or anything else it's harder.

✓ On the other hand, if I make a list on paper, I must find a pen or something else; it's harder.

The correct phrase is 'on the other hand', not 'in other hand'. Also, 'in paper' should be 'on paper'. The phrase 'do the making a list' is awkward; 'make a list' is correct.