List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer lacks clarity and contains grammatical errors, which affect naturalness and effectiveness. Try to respond directly with a clear topic sentence, then add specific supporting details using linking words. Keep your answer concise and avoid redundancy.

例: I don't usually make a list when I shop because I prefer to buy things based on my mood and what catches my eye. For example, if I feel like eating a snack, I choose something that appeals to me at that moment.

提案: Your answer addresses the question but has grammatical mistakes and unclear phrases. Use a clear topic sentence and link your supporting details logically. Be specific about how the list helps you and avoid confusing expressions.

例: Yes, I regularly make lists for my work, especially when practising the piano. For instance, I list tasks like correcting wrong notes in the score first, which helps me focus and improve efficiently.

提案: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to express your opinion clearly with a topic sentence, then explain your reasoning with specific examples using linking words. Avoid vague or confusing statements.

例: I think some people dislike making lists because life is always changing. For example, if plans change suddenly, a list might become useless, which can be frustrating.

提案: Your answer has many errors and is difficult to understand. Provide a clear topic sentence stating your preference, then explain why with specific reasons and linking words. Keep your answer concise and avoid repetition.

例: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it is more convenient than paper. For example, phones have many apps that help organise tasks easily and allow me to edit lists anytime.

× Not often, I always shopping with in my emotional and what I like when I look at it depends on what I am, what I look at and what's what's the snack would I like to eat.

✓ Not often, I am always shopping based on my emotions and what I like when I look at it; it depends on what I am, what I look at, and what snack I would like to eat.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'always shopping' without an auxiliary verb. The verb 'shopping' needs to be preceded by 'am' to form the present continuous tense ('I am always shopping'). Also, 'with in my emotional' is incorrect preposition and phrase usage; it should be 'based on my emotions' to express the intended meaning clearly.

× Yes, I made a link for my work regularly when I have to practice the piano and I will make a list about what have I do such as the firstly I have no word notes in the score and make it correct at length.

✓ Yes, I make a list for my work regularly when I have to practice the piano, and I make a list about what I have to do, such as first, I have no wrong notes in the score and I correct them thoroughly.

The sentence incorrectly uses 'made' (past tense) when referring to a habitual action, which requires the present tense 'make'. Also, 'what have I do' is incorrect word order and tense; it should be 'what I have to do'. 'Firstly' is better replaced with 'first' for natural usage. 'No word notes' is likely a mistake for 'no wrong notes'. The phrase 'make it correct at length' is awkward and corrected to 'correct them thoroughly'.

× In my opinion, I think less things in the world always changes. So if you make a list and that will be destroyed by the change or something such as if we plan to a city language.

✓ In my opinion, fewer things in the world always change. So if you make a list, it might be destroyed by changes, such as if we plan to learn a city language.

'Less things' is incorrect; 'fewer things' is used with countable nouns. 'Always changes' should be 'always change' to agree with the plural subject 'things'. The sentence structure is awkward and unclear; 'that will be destroyed by the change' is better as 'it might be destroyed by changes'. The phrase 'if we plan to a city language' is incomplete and corrected to 'if we plan to learn a city language'.

× I prefer to make a legs on my phone because in nowadays the phone is more California is is is more convenient than the paper because the phone has a lot of application that that that can support that we can use it and.

✓ I prefer to make lists on my phone because nowadays the phone is more convenient than paper since it has a lot of applications that can support us in using them.

'Make a legs' is incorrect; it should be 'make lists' (plural). 'In nowadays' is incorrect; 'nowadays' is used without 'in'. 'More California is is is more convenient' is nonsensical and removed. 'The paper' should be 'paper' without the article. 'A lot of application' should be 'a lot of applications' (plural). The sentence is restructured for clarity and grammatical correctness.