List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中存在语法错误，如"I'm not a person who like"应为"likes"，且表达不够简洁自然。建议使用更自然的表达方式，避免重复和语法错误。

例: No, I usually prefer to browse around the store and pick items that catch my eye rather than making a detailed shopping list.

提案: 回答中有语法和表达不流畅的问题，如"concentrate it on my work from a holistic view"不自然。建议简化句子结构，使用更准确的表达。

例: Yes, I make a list for my work because it helps me focus and manage my tasks more effectively.

提案: 回答中有重复和语法错误，如"some people they"。建议使用更连贯的句子，并用连接词使表达更流畅。

例: I think it depends on a person's habits; some can complete their tasks well without a list, while others find lists necessary to stay organized.

提案: 回答中有重复词汇和语法错误，如"didn't I I I haven't"和"makes make it more easier"。建议注意语法准确性，避免重复，表达更简洁。

例: I prefer making lists on my phone because useful apps can remind me of deadlines and unfinished tasks, making it easier to stay organized.

× Not really, I like to wander in the shop to find some pieces that I really like and I'm not a person who like to make a detailed list guide me to shop.

✓ Not really, I like to wander in the shop to find some pieces that I really like and I'm not a person who likes to make a detailed list to guide me to shop.

这里的主语是单数的"a person"，所以谓语动词"like"应改为第三人称单数形式"likes"。

× Yes, I will make a list for my work because it can help me concentrate it on my work from a holistic view and that is really help me to to work effectively.

✓ Yes, I will make a list for my work because it can help me concentrate on my work from a holistic view and that really helps me to work effectively.

动词"concentrate"后应接介词"on"，而且"that is really help me"中"help"应为第三人称单数形式"helps"，且去掉多余的"to"。

× I do think that it depends on person's characteristics, because some people they will finish their job in a good way even though they don't have a list, but some people might need it.

✓ I do think that it depends on a person's characteristics, because some people will finish their job in a good way even though they don't have a list, but some people might need it.

"person's characteristics"前应加不定冠词"a"，表示某个人的特征。

× I do think that it depends on person's characteristics, because some people they will finish their job in a good way even though they don't have a list, but some people might need it.

✓ I do think that it depends on a person's characteristics, because some people will finish their job in a good way even though they don't have a list, but some people might need it.

句中"some people they will"重复使用主语，应去掉其中一个，避免冗余。

× I like to make a list on my phone because I can use some really useful apps to remind me the timeline or the tasks that I didn't I I I haven't finished so smartphone makes make it more easier for me.

✓ I like to make a list on my phone because I can use some really useful apps to remind me of the timeline or the tasks that I haven't finished, so smartphones make it easier for me.

"remind"后应加介词"of"，"didn't I I I haven't finished"语法混乱，应简化为"haven't finished"。"smartphone makes make it more easier"中"makes make"重复，且"more easier"是双重比较，应改为"easier"。