List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is clear and relevant, but it can be more natural and concise. Avoid redundancy like 'Of course, yes' and try to use linking words to enhance coherence.

例: Yes, I always make a list when I shop because it helps me remember everything important and saves time.

提案: The answer needs grammatical correction and clearer expression. Use proper sentence structure and linking words to explain why making a list helps you at work.

例: Yes, I make a list for my work because it helps me organise my tasks efficiently and ensures I don't miss anything important.

提案: Your answer is understandable but can be improved by using more precise vocabulary and linking words. Also, correct minor grammatical errors.

例: Some people dislike making lists because they believe it wastes time, as they can easily remember everything without writing it down.

提案: The answer has grammatical mistakes and awkward phrasing. Use simpler, clearer language and avoid unnecessary words. Also, explain why using a phone is easier.

例: I prefer making lists on my mobile phone because it's convenient and I can easily add or remove items while shopping.

× Yes, I make a list for my work because it is easier to me to tackle every of a task of my work.

✓ Yes, I make a list for my work because it is easier for me to tackle every task of my work.

The preposition 'to' is incorrectly used after 'easier'; the correct preposition is 'for' in this context. Also, 'every of a task' is incorrect; it should be 'every task' without 'of a'. This improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Sometimes people think that that is a waste of time because they remember all thing very easily.

✓ Sometimes people think that that is a waste of time because they remember all things very easily.

The phrase 'all thing' is incorrect because 'thing' should be plural when preceded by 'all'. The correct form is 'all things' to indicate multiple items.

× In the modern era, we all youngsters using the electronic judges and technologies, so therefore I prefer to make a list on my mobile phone because it is easier to me when I shop.

✓ In the modern era, we youngsters all use electronic gadgets and technologies, so therefore I prefer to make a list on my mobile phone because it is easier for me when I shop.

The phrase 'we all youngsters using' is incorrect; it should be 'we youngsters all use' to form a proper subject-verb structure. 'Electronic judges' is a wrong term; the correct word is 'electronic gadgets'. Also, 'easier to me' should be 'easier for me' as the correct preposition after 'easier' is 'for'.