List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Perbaiki tata bahasa dan pilih kata yang tepat untuk membuat jawaban lebih alami dan efektif. Misalnya, gunakan 'shopping' bukan 'shipping', dan gunakan kalimat yang lebih ringkas dan jelas.

例: I usually make a shopping list organized by categories like vegetables, fruits, and household products. This helps me find what I need quickly and makes shopping more efficient.

提案: Perbaiki penggunaan idiom dan tata bahasa agar jawaban lebih jelas dan alami. Hindari frasa yang tidak tepat seperti 'make my throat become clearer'. Gunakan kalimat yang langsung dan mudah dipahami.

例: Yes, I make a list for my work because it helps me prioritize tasks and ensures I don't forget anything important. It really helps me stay organized.

提案: Perbaiki tata bahasa dan struktur kalimat agar jawaban lebih jelas dan logis. Gunakan kata penghubung untuk menghubungkan ide dan hindari kalimat yang membingungkan.

例: In my opinion, some people don't like making lists because they already know what they want to do and prefer things to happen naturally without planning.

提案: Perbaiki tata bahasa dan lengkapi kalimat yang tidak selesai. Gunakan kalimat yang jelas dan lengkap untuk menjelaskan alasan preferensi Anda.

例: I prefer making lists on paper because it helps me organize my thoughts better. However, sometimes it's inconvenient because I might forget to bring the paper with me.

× I usually make a checklist before shopping.

✓ I usually make a checklist before I go shopping.

The phrase 'before shopping' is incomplete and sounds unnatural. Adding 'I go' clarifies the action and makes the sentence grammatically correct.

× I organize them by categories such as vegetables, fruits and household products.

✓ I organize it by categories such as vegetables, fruits and household products.

The pronoun 'them' refers to plural, but 'checklist' is singular. Therefore, 'it' should be used to refer to the checklist.

× It makes me easier to find what I really need to buy and it makes me shipping easier and effective.

✓ It makes it easier for me to find what I really need to buy and makes shopping easier and more effective.

The phrase 'makes me easier' is incorrect; 'makes it easier for me' is correct. Also, 'makes me shipping easier' is incorrect; it should be 'makes shopping easier'. 'Effective' should be 'more effective' to compare properly.

× Yes, I make a list for my work and it really works to make my throat become clearer and I can prioritize what task should be done first without forget anything important with our task.

✓ Yes, I make a list for my work and it really helps me to be more organized and I can prioritize which tasks should be done first without forgetting anything important in our tasks.

The phrase 'make my throat become clearer' is incorrect and likely a misuse of idiom. 'Helps me to be more organized' is clearer. 'Without forget' should be 'without forgetting'. 'Our task' should be plural 'our tasks'.

× Well in my opinion I people who don't making list maybe already know what they want to do and they really love something happen just the way they are and it might be by having a list.

✓ Well, in my opinion, people who don't make lists maybe already know what they want to do and they really love things to happen just the way they are, and it might be because of having a list.

The phrase 'I people' is incorrect; 'I' should be removed. 'Don't making list' should be 'don't make lists'. 'Something happen' should be 'things to happen'. 'It might be by having a list' is unclear; 'because of having a list' is better.

× I prefer making a list in paper rather than my phone because it easier for me to break down what's in my mind by that method.

✓ I prefer making a list on paper rather than on my phone because it's easier for me to break down what's in my mind using that method.

The correct preposition is 'on paper' and 'on my phone'. 'It easier' should be 'it's easier'. 'By that method' is better expressed as 'using that method'.

× I found that using paper sometimes inconvenient because I sometimes forget to bring my to.

✓ I find that using paper is sometimes inconvenient because I sometimes forget to bring it with me.

'Found' should be 'find' to match present tense. 'Using paper sometimes inconvenient' needs 'is' to be correct. 'Forget to bring my to' is incomplete; 'bring it with me' is correct.