List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答有些冗长且表达不够清晰，建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并且注意语法错误，如"in in timely"应改为"in a timely manner"。可以先直接回答问题，然后用一两句具体说明为什么做购物清单。

例: Yes, I always make a grocery list before shopping. This helps me remember everything I need and saves time at the store.

提案: 回答中有重复和语法错误，如"cross cross it off"和"make it makes me"。建议简洁表达，使用连接词使句子更流畅，同时注意时态和单复数。

例: Yes, I make a daily work list because I have many tasks. I cross off each task when finished, which gives me a sense of accomplishment.

提案: 回答不够连贯且语法错误较多，表达不清楚。建议先明确观点，再用具体原因支持，注意时态和句子完整性。

例: Some people don't like making lists because they don't have urgent deadlines. They prefer to do tasks whenever they want without strict schedules.

提案: 回答中有语法错误和重复，如"my is more easier"和"my list my list"。建议使用完整句子，避免重复，并且清楚表达偏好和原因。

例: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it's easier to use and I always have it with me. Paper lists can get lost or damaged easily.

× Yes, I have a grocery list because I tend to plan everything in advance so making sure that I purchase and receive every product I need in in timely so that I will drop down the name of the product I need in the list and I will bring the list with me.

✓ Yes, I have a grocery list because I tend to plan everything in advance to make sure that I purchase and receive every product I need in a timely manner, so I write down the name of the product I need on the list and bring the list with me.

原句中“so making sure”用法不当，应使用不定式“to make sure”表示目的。建议用“to make sure”替换“so making sure”，使句子结构正确，表达清晰。

× Yes, I have a grocery list because I tend to plan everything in advance so making sure that I purchase and receive every product I need in in timely so that I will drop down the name of the product I need in the list and I will bring the list with me.

✓ Yes, I have a grocery list because I tend to plan everything in advance to make sure that I purchase and receive every product I need in a timely manner, so I write down the name of the product I need on the list and bring the list with me.

原句中“in in timely”重复且介词使用错误，正确表达应为“in a timely manner”，表示“及时地”。另外，“drop down the name of the product I need in the list”中应使用“write down”和“on the list”来表达“写下产品名称在清单上”。

× Yes, I have a list for my work every day because my work is busy and there are many tasks, without writing them down I might forget some of them and after one I will cross cross it off.

✓ Yes, I have a list for my work every day because my work is busy and there are many tasks. Without writing them down, I might forget some of them, and after completing one, I will cross it off.

原句中“after one I will cross cross it off”表达不清且重复，应改为“after completing one, I will cross it off”，使用动名词短语“completing”表示完成任务后再划掉。

× So then make it makes me feel satisfied and a sense of completion that makes me happy.

✓ So then it makes me feel satisfied and gives me a sense of completion that makes me happy.

原句中“make it makes”结构错误，重复使用动词，应去掉“make it”，改为“it makes”。同时补充“gives me”使句子更完整。

× I believe that because some people are not doing tasks with time emergencies, under time emergency or with limited amount of time.

✓ I believe that some people are not doing tasks under time pressure or with a limited amount of time.

原句中“with time emergencies, under time emergency”表达不自然，应使用“under time pressure”表示“在时间压力下”。同时“limited amount of time”前应加冠词“a”。

× So they could do anything they want and they can doing some task now or doing some tasks later and it will not.

✓ So they can do anything they want and can do some tasks now or some tasks later, and it will not matter.

原句中“they can doing”错误，情态动词后应接动词原形，改为“they can do”。句尾“and it will not”不完整，补充“matter”使句意完整。

× I prefer to make a list on my because my is more easier.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone because it is easier.

原句中“on my”缺少名词，且“my is more easier”中“my”用法错误，应使用“it”，且“more easier”重复比较级，应改为“easier”。

× I prefer to make a list on my because my is more easier. It's much more easier to use, and I carry it with me all day.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone because it is easier. It's much easier to use, and I carry it with me all day.

“more easier”是错误的比较级表达，正确用法是“easier”，因为“easy”是单音节词，直接加“-er”。

× If I carry a paper with me, it might easily get ripped off, so I lose my list my list of tasks.

✓ If I carry a paper with me, it might easily get ripped, and I could lose my list of tasks.

原句“get ripped off”通常指“被敲诈”，此处应为“get ripped”表示“被撕破”。“so I lose my list my list of tasks”重复且结构不完整，应改为“and I could lose my list of tasks”。