List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中时态使用不准确，且表达不够自然。建议使用正确的时态和更简洁的表达方式，例如将“wanna”替换为“want to”，并避免重复表达“remind me”。

例: Yes, I usually make a shopping list because it helps me remember the items I need to buy.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，如“quite spray a difference”不合适。建议使用更准确的词汇和句式，避免口语化缩写，表达更连贯。

例: Yes, I usually make a list for my work because it helps me remember important tasks and improves my efficiency.

提案: 回答表达较为模糊，逻辑不够清晰。建议使用更明确的原因，并用连接词使句子更连贯。

例: Some people don't like making lists because they think it wastes time, and they prefer to do tasks spontaneously instead.

提案: 回答中表达不够清晰，语法错误较多。建议明确表达偏好，使用正确的语法，并避免重复。

例: I prefer to make lists in my mind because I find writing them on paper a waste of time.

× Yes, I wanna make one when I was shopping and it helps me to remind me of something I wanted to buy.

✓ Yes, I wanted to make one when I was shopping and it helped me to remind me of something I wanted to buy.

这里涉及过去时态的使用。原句中“wanna make”是口语缩写且时态不一致，应改为过去时“wanted to make”，同时“helps”应改为过去时“helped”，以保持时态一致。

× Yes, I usually make one and it quite spray a difference because when I work without my list I often forget something significant and at least help me to remind me of the things I'm gonna do.

✓ Yes, I usually make one and it quite makes a difference because when I work without my list I often forget something significant and at least it helps me to remind me of the things I'm going to do.

原句中“quite spray a difference”是错误表达，应为“quite makes a difference”。此外，“at least help me”缺少主语，应加上“it”。“gonna”是口语，应改为正式表达“going to”。

× Well, I quite understand them because maybe they think a list might be a waste of time.

✓ Well, I quite understand them because maybe they think that a list might be a waste of time.

句中缺少连接词“that”，使句子更完整和正式。

× When they're thinking how to make a list, they might have done several things.

✓ When they're thinking about how to make a list, they might have done several things.

动词“think”后应接介词“about”表示“思考关于某事”，缺少介词导致表达不完整。

× Oh, I don't really prefer, but I'll do it really because I'm the kind of person that I think making a list on paper a waste of time.

✓ Oh, I don't really have a preference, but I'll do it because I'm the kind of person who thinks making a list on paper is a waste of time.

“don't really prefer”表达不完整，应改为“don't really have a preference”。“that I think”应改为“who thinks”，且“making a list on paper a waste of time”缺少动词“is”。

× I often make a list in my mind and memorize them.

✓ I often make a list in my mind and memorize it.

“a list”是单数，代词应使用单数“it”，而不是复数“them”。