List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答不够自然且语法错误较多，表达不清晰。建议用简单明了的句子直接回答问题，并说明原因。

例: No, I usually don't make a list when I go shopping because I prefer to buy things spontaneously.

提案: 回答结构简单，语法和表达不够准确。建议使用完整句子，并用连接词丰富内容。

例: Yes, I do make lists for my work because they help me organize tasks and improve my efficiency.

提案: 回答不连贯且含义不清，语法错误严重。建议先明确观点，再用具体理由支持，使用连接词使表达更流畅。

例: Some people don't like making lists because they find it boring and prefer to work spontaneously.

提案: 回答表达混乱，语法错误较多。建议清晰表达偏好，并说明原因，使用连接词使句子连贯。

例: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it is convenient and I always have it with me.

× No, I didn't because I go to the shop.

✓ No, I didn't because I went to the shop.

这里的动作发生在过去，应该使用过去时态。原句中使用了现在时态“go”，应改为过去时态“went”。

× I don't know what is my buy.

✓ I don't know what to buy.

原句中“what is my buy”结构不正确，应该使用不定式“what to buy”来表达“买什么”。

× I think make a list can help me then better my work.

✓ I think making a list can help me improve my work.

“make a list”应改为动名词形式“making a list”作为主语；“then better my work”表达不自然，应改为“improve my work”。

× Because I think some people don't like making less is very lazy.

✓ Because I think some people who don't like making lists are very lazy.

原句中“making less”应为“making lists”，且句子结构不完整，需加上关系代词“who”连接从句。

× Then they don't know what can make it last.

✓ Then they don't know how to make it last.

“what can make it last”表达不准确，应该用“how to make it last”表示“如何让它持续”。

× Paper on my phone.

✓ Paper, not my phone.

原句缺少连词，表达不完整，应加上“not”表示对比。

× I prefer to make a list of my phone because my phone is very easy, then I usually use my phone.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone because it is very convenient, so I usually use my phone.

“then”用法不当，应改为“so”表示因果关系；“my phone is very easy”表达不准确，应改为“it is very convenient”。