List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答有點冗長且語法不夠自然，建議用更簡潔且正確的句子表達，例如避免使用"remember it in my hat"這種不自然的說法。

例: No, I usually don't make a list when I shop. Instead, I try to remember what I need to buy before I go to the store.

提案: 回答中有語法錯誤和用詞不當，建議使用正確的時態和連接詞，使句子更流暢且有邏輯。

例: Yes, I usually make a to-do list for my work. This helps me keep track of what I have done and what still needs to be finished. It works well to keep me on track.

提案: 你的回答與問題不符，且句子結構混亂。建議直接回答為何有些人不喜歡列清單，並用清楚的句子表達。

例: Some people don't like making lists because they find it time-consuming or prefer to remember things naturally without writing them down.

提案: 回答中有用詞錯誤（"film"應為"phone"），且句子較長且不夠流暢。建議用簡潔且正確的詞彙表達。

例: I prefer to make lists on my phone because I won't lose it. Also, it's easier to edit and looks neat compared to paper lists.

× I will think about what I wanted to buy before I go to the store.

✓ I will think about what I want to buy before I go to the store.

The sentence mixes future tense 'will think' with past tense 'wanted', which is inconsistent. Since the action is about future intention, 'want' in present tense should be used to match the future context.

× But usually I will just remember it in my hat and don't really write it down or type it in my cell phone.

✓ But usually I will just remember it in my head and don't really write it down or type it on my cell phone.

The phrase 'in my hat' is incorrect; the correct idiom is 'in my head'. Also, the preposition 'in' before 'my cell phone' should be 'on' because we type on devices.

× Yes, I usually make A to do list for my work.

✓ Yes, I usually make a to-do list for my work.

The article 'A' should be lowercase 'a' and 'to do list' should be hyphenated as 'to-do list' to form a correct noun phrase.

× Then I will know what I done and what I haven't finished yet.

✓ Then I will know what I have done and what I haven't finished yet.

The verb 'done' requires an auxiliary verb 'have' to form the present perfect tense 'have done' to indicate completed actions relevant to the present.

× And I think it worked quite well to let me be on the progress.

✓ And I think it works quite well to help me stay on track.

The sentence refers to a general truth or current situation, so present tense 'works' is appropriate. Also, 'let me be on the progress' is awkward; 'help me stay on track' is a clearer expression.

× I think those people who like to make a list is because making lists can make things more clearly and you can know what you're doing in a more clear way to list it out one by one and you won't lose anything important.

✓ I think those people who like to make lists do so because making lists can make things clearer and you can know what you're doing in a clearer way by listing things out one by one and you won't lose anything important.

The subject 'those people' is plural, so the verb should be 'do' not 'is'. Also, 'make a list' should be plural 'make lists' to match the plural subject. 'More clearly' should be 'clearer' as an adjective modifying 'things'. The phrase 'to list it out' is better as 'by listing things out' for clarity.

× For now I prefer to make a list on my film because I won't lose it.

✓ For now I prefer to make a list on my phone because I won't lose it.

The word 'film' is incorrect here; it should be 'phone' to refer to the device. The preposition 'on' is correct for using a phone app.

× If I write it down on paper then I might forget to bring it and if I write it wrong then I will need to write it again.

✓ If I write it down on paper then I might forget to bring it, and if I write it wrong then I will need to write it again.

A comma is needed before 'and' to separate two independent clauses. The rest is grammatically correct.

× And I like the things to look pretty, so I will use phone.

✓ And I like things to look pretty, so I will use my phone.

The phrase 'the things' is incorrect; it should be 'things' without 'the'. Also, 'use phone' is missing the possessive pronoun 'my' to specify the phone being used.