List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中存在语法错误，如'impose purchase'应为'impulse purchase'，且句子结构稍显复杂，建议简化表达并注意语法准确性。此外，回答较长，建议控制在5句以内，避免冗余。

例: Yes, I usually make a shopping list before going to the store because it helps me remember what I need and avoid impulse purchases. For example, last week I made a detailed list which helped me shop more efficiently and save both time and money. This way, I can focus on buying only what I really want.

提案: 回答中出现了不完整的句子'Which?'，影响表达的连贯性和清晰度。建议避免使用不完整或不明确的句子，确保回答完整且逻辑清晰。

例: Yes, I usually make a list before I start working. For example, last month I made a list before studying senior maths, which helped me study more efficiently.

提案: 回答较为自然且内容具体，但可以使用更多连接词使表达更连贯，如使用'therefore'或'so'连接句子。

例: In my opinion, some people don't like making lists because they prefer to work spontaneously without planning every step. Therefore, they might feel that making lists are too restrictive and slow them down. For example, they want to start tasks directly and decide what to do as they go.

提案: 回答中存在词汇错误，如'my'后缺少名词，'crying extra paper'应为'using extra paper'。建议注意词汇准确性和完整表达。

例: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it's convenient and easy to access anytime. For example, I can quickly add or delete items without using extra paper, and I often use apps that remind me about important tasks. This way, I stay organized and don't forget anything important.

× Yes, I usually make a shopping list before going to the store because it helps me remember all the initial items I need and avoid impose purchase.

✓ Yes, I usually make a shopping list before going to the store because it helps me remember all the initial items I need and avoid impulse purchases.

这里的错误是动词形式错误，'impose purchase' 应为 'impulse purchases'，因为表达的是“冲动购买”，'impulse' 是形容词，'purchase' 应为复数名词。

× For example, last week I made a detailed list which allow me to shop more efficiently and save both time and money.

✓ For example, last week I made a detailed list which allowed me to shop more efficiently and save both time and money.

这里的错误是动词时态不一致，句子主句是过去时 'made'，从句中动词也应使用过去时 'allowed'，而不是现在时 'allow'。

× Yes, I usually make a list before I'm working.

✓ Yes, I usually make a list before I work.

这里的错误是时态和语态使用不当，'before I'm working' 应改为一般现在时 'before I work'，因为表达的是习惯性动作。

× It helped me study efficiently. Which?

✓ It helped me study efficiently.

'Which?' 这个词在这里没有意义，属于句子结构错误，应删除。

× I prefer to make lists on my because it's convenient and easy to access anytime.

✓ I prefer to make lists on my phone because it's convenient and easy to access anytime.

这里缺少名词，'my' 后面应接名词 'phone'，否则代词使用不完整。

× I can quickly add or delete items without crying extra paper, and I often use apps that remind me about important tasks.

✓ I can quickly add or delete items without using extra paper, and I often use apps that remind me about important tasks.

'crying' 是错误的词，正确应为 'using'，表示“使用额外的纸张”，这里是形容词或副词使用错误。