List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Ответ должен быть более естественным и структурированным. Избегайте повторений и грамматических ошибок. Используйте связующие слова для логичности и добавьте конкретные детали.

例: Yes, I always make a shopping list because it helps me save money. For example, I only buy the food I need for daily meals, which prevents unnecessary purchases. This method is especially useful for people who buy a variety of groceries.

提案: Ответ содержит много повторений и грамматических ошибок. Следует отвечать прямо на вопрос, использовать связующие слова и конкретные примеры.

例: Yes, I make a daily to-do list for my work and exercise. For instance, I plan my tasks and workouts every day, which helps me stay organized and productive. I believe making plans is beneficial for everyone.

提案: Ответ должен быть более связным и грамматически правильным. Используйте связующие слова и объясните причину более подробно.

例: I think some people dislike making lists because it takes time. For example, spending 15 to 20 minutes planning for the next day might seem unnecessary to them.

提案: Ответ содержит грамматические ошибки и повторения. Следует использовать связующие слова и более точные выражения.

例: I prefer making lists on my phone because I use it daily. This way, I can easily check my tasks anytime, which is very convenient and helpful in managing my life.

× Yes, I make lists when I shop, the list can retain my money.

✓ Yes, I make lists when I shop; the lists can help me save money.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'the list' after mentioning 'lists', causing inconsistency in number. 'Lists' is plural, so the following reference should also be plural. Also, 'retain my money' is not idiomatic; 'help me save money' is clearer.

× I buy only food which I need to eat and every day.

✓ I buy only the food that I need to eat every day.

The relative pronoun 'which' is incorrectly used; 'that' is more appropriate for defining clauses. Also, 'and every day' is misplaced; it should be 'every day' modifying 'eat'.

× And I think it is best to people who purchase different different food.

✓ And I think it is best for people who purchase different kinds of food.

The phrase 'best to people' should be 'best for people'. Also, 'different different food' is incorrect; it should be 'different kinds of food' to indicate variety.

× I I make list when I walk.

✓ I make a list when I work.

The sentence likely intended 'work' instead of 'walk'. Also, 'make list' is missing the article 'a' before 'list'.

× I I plan my plans every day.

✓ I plan my tasks every day.

'Plan my plans' is redundant; 'plan my tasks' or 'make plans' is better. Also, repeated 'I' is a mistake.

× I think that make plan is a good idea for people.

✓ I think that making a plan is a good idea for people.

The phrase 'that make plan' is incorrect; it should be 'that making a plan' to use the gerund form as the subject.

× I think some people don't like making lists because it consume time.

✓ I think some people don't like making lists because it consumes time.

The verb 'consume' should be in third person singular form 'consumes' to agree with the singular subject 'it'.

× You need to take 15 or 20 minutes to make your plan for following days.

✓ You need to take 15 or 20 minutes to make your plan for the following days.

The phrase 'for following days' is missing the definite article 'the' before 'following days'.

× I prefer to make a list on my phone because I use I use phone every day and I can easily looked on my phone and understand what I need to do and it a very useful thing in your life.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone because I use my phone every day, and I can easily look at my phone and understand what I need to do. It is a very useful thing in life.

Repeated 'I use' is an error. 'Use phone' should be 'use my phone'. 'Looked' is past tense; it should be 'look' to match present tense. 'It a very useful thing' is missing the verb 'is'. 'In your life' is better as 'in life' for general statement.