List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，建议使用正确的时态和简洁的句子表达观点，同时避免重复和冗余。

例: No, I usually don't make a list when I go shopping because I prefer to choose items spontaneously without limiting my options.

提案: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不连贯，建议先明确回答问题，再用简洁的句子说明原因，注意时态和词汇的准确使用。

例: No, I don't usually make lists for my work because I find them ineffective. I prefer to make decisions flexibly and spontaneously.

提案: 回答中语法和词汇使用不准确，建议使用正确的句子结构和连接词，表达更清晰具体。

例: Some people dislike making lists because they feel it limits their choices. They prefer to make decisions more flexibly and spontaneously, which they find more efficient.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和词汇使用不当，建议使用正确的时态和词汇，表达更自然流畅。

例: If I make a list, I prefer to use my phone because it's easy to edit and I can manage my list more flexibly.

× Unfortunately I don't make a list when I was shopping because I think at least my limit my choice choice and I want to do some do a decisions by myself when I was shopping and.

✓ Unfortunately I didn't make a list when I was shopping because I think it limits my choices and I want to make some decisions by myself when I was shopping.

这里的时间是过去时，表示过去购物时的情况，所以动词时态应使用过去时。原句中使用了现在时态'don't make'，应改为过去时'didn't make'。另外，句子中存在重复和表达不清的问题，进行了适当调整。

× Unfortunately I don't make a list when I was shopping because I think at least my limit my choice choice and I want to do some do a decisions by myself when I was shopping and.

✓ Unfortunately I didn't make a list when I was shopping because I think it limits my choices and I want to make some decisions by myself when I was shopping.

'choice choice'重复且用词错误，应为复数形式'choices'，表示多个选择。

× Unfortunately I don't make a need for my works because the need is doesn't work and I also do something just and I make a decision flexible and spontaneous.

✓ Unfortunately I don't make a list for my work because the list doesn't work and I also do things spontaneously and make decisions flexibly.

这里谈论的是现在的习惯，使用现在时态'don't make'是正确的。原句中'works'应为不可数名词'work'，'need'应为'list'，且句子结构混乱，进行了调整。

× Unfortunately I don't make a need for my works because the need is doesn't work and I also do something just and I make a decision flexible and spontaneous.

✓ Unfortunately I don't make a list for my work because the list doesn't work and I also do things spontaneously and make decisions flexibly.

'a need'用法错误，应为'a list'，且'works'应为不可数名词'work'。

× Unfortunately I don't make a need for my works because the need is doesn't work and I also do something just and I make a decision flexible and spontaneous.

✓ Unfortunately I don't make a list for my work because the list doesn't work and I also do things spontaneously and make decisions flexibly.

'make a decision flexible and spontaneous'中，'flexible'和'spontaneous'应为副词形式，修饰动词'make decisions'，应改为'flexibly and spontaneously'。

× Because some people think mechanisms is limit their choice and their decisions and these people prefer to do decide more flexible and spontaneous and this is more efficiently.

✓ Because some people think mechanisms limit their choices and decisions, and these people prefer to decide more flexibly and spontaneously, which is more efficient.

'mechanisms is'主谓不一致，应为'mechanisms are'或直接用单数'mechanism is'。'choice'应为复数'choices'。'do decide'重复，去掉'do'。'flexible and spontaneous'应为副词形式'flexibly and spontaneously'。'more efficiently'应为形容词'more efficient'。

× Because some people think mechanisms is limit their choice and their decisions and these people prefer to do decide more flexible and spontaneous and this is more efficiently.

✓ Because some people think mechanisms limit their choices and decisions, and these people prefer to decide more flexibly and spontaneously, which is more efficient.

主语'mechanisms'为复数，谓语动词应为'limit'，而非'is limit'。

× Because some people think mechanisms is limit their choice and their decisions and these people prefer to do decide more flexible and spontaneous and this is more efficiently.

✓ Because some people think mechanisms limit their choices and decisions, and these people prefer to decide more flexibly and spontaneously, which is more efficient.

'more flexible and spontaneous'应为副词形式，修饰动词'prefer to decide'，应改为'more flexibly and spontaneously'。'more efficiently'应为形容词'more efficient'，用来修饰句子。

× If I will make a list, I will make a niece in phones because I think the next in the phone can be removed and I can do a list more flexibly and spontaneously.

✓ If I make a list, I will make a note on my phone because I think the notes on the phone can be removed and I can make a list more flexibly and spontaneously.

条件句中，'if'从句不使用将来时，应该用一般现在时'If I make a list'。'make a niece'应为'make a note'。'in phones'应为'on my phone'。'do a list'应为'make a list'。