List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答有些语法错误和重复词汇，且表达不够简洁自然。建议注意时态一致性，避免重复，并使用更自然流畅的表达方式。

例: Yes, I always make a shopping list before I go. It helps me save time and energy by allowing me to buy everything I need efficiently.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，建议使用更准确的时态和句式，并且避免句子过长导致表达混乱。

例: Yes, I make lists for my work. I break down tasks into smaller parts to focus better, and then I review my progress regularly.

提案: 回答中有语法错误和用词不当，表达不够清晰。建议注意单复数形式，使用更准确的词汇，并且使句子结构更完整。

例: Some people dislike making lists because they feel it limits their spontaneity. They prefer to act on impulse rather than follow a fixed plan.

提案: 回答中有语法错误和表达不连贯的问题，建议简化句子结构，注意冠词和词序的正确使用，使表达更自然。

例: I prefer making lists on my phone or computer because it's more convenient. Paper lists can be lost or unavailable when I'm away from home.

× I made list of the the products I wanted to buy before going shopping.

✓ I made a list of the products I wanted to buy before going shopping.

这里缺少冠词“a”，因为“list”是可数名词，单数形式前需要加冠词。

× I made list of the the products I wanted to buy before going shopping.

✓ I made a list of the products I wanted to buy before going shopping.

“the the”是重复使用定冠词，应该去掉一个。

× I instantly divide them into small sections so that I could focus on one of them which allowed me to be better performed in this sector and then I will evaluate the the overall progress so.

✓ I instantly divide them into small sections so that I could focus on one of them, which allows me to perform better in this sector, and then I will evaluate the overall progress.

“the the”重复使用定冠词，应去掉一个；“allowed”时态不对，应与前文时态一致用现在时“allows”；“be better performed”表达不正确，应改为“perform better”。

× I instantly divide them into small sections so that I could focus on one of them which allowed me to be better performed in this sector and then I will evaluate the the overall progress so.

✓ I instantly divide them into small sections so that I could focus on one of them, which allows me to perform better in this sector, and then I will evaluate the overall progress.

句子中“the the overall progress”重复使用定冠词，应去掉一个。

× list actually restrict their personality.

✓ lists actually restrict their personality.

“list”应为复数形式“lists”，因为这里指的是一般情况的多个列表。

× some people are spontaneous persons, they want to do things on their will as long as they can think of it, and least could be a restriction on their improvised.

✓ some people are spontaneous persons; they want to do things of their own will as long as they can think of it, and lists could be a restriction on their improvisation.

“on their will”应改为“of their own will”，表达“凭自己的意愿”；“least”应为“lists”；“improvised”应为名词“improvisation”。

× I prefer to make lists on my computer or any other electronic devices because it is more convenient.

✓ I prefer to make lists on my computer or any other electronic device because it is more convenient.

“devices”应与前面的“my computer”保持一致，改为单数“device”。

× As you know when I write list on the and the paper, the paper may be got lost or the notebook may be unavailable in other places.

✓ As you know, when I write a list on paper, the paper may get lost or the notebook may be unavailable in other places.

“write list”缺少冠词，应为“write a list”；“on the and the paper”结构错误，应为“on paper”；“may be got lost”表达错误，应为“may get lost”。

× For example, when I go need to go out for a long distance.

✓ For example, when I need to go out for a long distance.

“go need to go”结构错误，应去掉多余的“go”。