List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is clear but can be more natural and concise. Use present tense consistently and avoid redundancy. For example, say "I usually prepare a list when I go to the market because it helps me buy everything I need."

例: I usually prepare a list when I go to the market because it helps me buy everything I need without forgetting anything.

提案: Your answer is understandable but can be improved by using correct phrases and clearer structure. Instead of "complete my task time to time," say "complete my tasks on time." Also, avoid repeating "I always remember all the things."

例: To be honest, I have a sharp memory, so I don't usually make lists for my work. I can remember my tasks well and complete them on time.

提案: There are grammatical errors and redundancy in your answer. Use correct phrases like "do not like making lists" and avoid repeating ideas. Also, use linking words for coherence. For example, "Some people don't like making lists because they believe they have a sharp memory and can remember everything. Therefore, they think making lists is a waste of time."

例: Some people don't like making lists because they believe their memory is good enough to remember everything. Therefore, they consider making lists a waste of time.

提案: Your answer has unclear phrases and grammar mistakes. Use correct words like "list" instead of "leisure" and improve sentence structure. For example, "I prefer to make lists on my mobile phone because it is portable and I always carry it when I go out."

例: I prefer to make lists on my mobile phone because it is portable, and I always carry my smartphone when I go out.

× Usually I like to prepare a list whenever I have to go to the market because it helps me to buy all the things which I needed.

✓ Usually I like to prepare a list whenever I have to go to the market because it helps me to buy all the things which I need.

The verb 'needed' is in the past tense, but the sentence context is present habitual action. The correct tense is present 'need' to match the ongoing situation.

× Well, some people do not like make sure because they feel they have a sharp memory and they can easily remember all the things which they require and therefore they think to prepare a list.

✓ Well, some people do not like to make sure because they feel they have a sharp memory and they can easily remember all the things which they require and therefore they think preparing a list is a wastage of time.

The phrase 'do not like make sure' is incorrect. The correct form is 'do not like to make sure' or better 'do not like to make lists'. Also, 'think to prepare a list' is incorrect; it should be 'think preparing a list is a wastage of time' to express their opinion properly.

× Well, I like to prepare a leisure on my mobile phone because I can easily carry my mobile phone due to portable and whenever I go outdoor usually I carry my smartphone and sometime I feel not bad.

✓ Well, I like to prepare a list on my mobile phone because I can easily carry my mobile phone as it is portable and whenever I go outdoors, I usually carry my smartphone and sometimes I feel it's not bad.

The word 'leisure' is incorrect; it should be 'list'. The phrase 'due to portable' is incorrect; it should be 'as it is portable'. 'Go outdoor' should be 'go outdoors'. 'Sometime' should be 'sometimes'. The phrase 'I feel not bad' is incomplete; it should be 'I feel it's not bad'.