List— Part 1 採点レポート
会話
Part 1
試験官
Do you make a list when you shop?
受験者
No, I don't usually do so. I don't like to follow a list. I just want to shop what I want, whatever I want, and buy anything that attracts my interest. That's what I that's the reason why I don't follow a list.
試験官
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
受験者
Although I actually make a list every day for my work, but I don't usually follow that schedule strictly because I was very lazy person and my concentration is easily to be abstracted.
試験官
Why don't some people like making lists?
受験者
Because they don't want to be strictly restricted. They want to do whatever comes to their head. They want to act in a more natural way.
試験官
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
受験者
I mostly prefer to make lists on a paper because making lists on the paper is more intuitive than making a list on my. When I'm watching my mobile phones, I have no time spared to notice the list in my. So if I put a list on a paper, it would be better for me to notice.
評価
総合
Part 1
Do you make a list when you shop?
スコア: 65.0提案: 回答中存在重复和语法错误，表达不够自然。建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并使用更地道的表达方式。
例: No, I usually don't make a list when I shop because I prefer to buy whatever catches my interest at the moment.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
スコア: 60.0提案: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不够清晰。建议注意时态一致，避免重复连接词，并用更准确的词汇表达原因。
例: I do make a list every day for my work, but I don't always follow it strictly because I tend to get distracted easily.
Why don't some people like making lists?
スコア: 75.0提案: 回答较为简洁，但缺少连接词使句子显得断裂。建议使用连接词使表达更连贯，同时丰富细节。
例: Some people dislike making lists because they don't want to feel restricted; instead, they prefer to act spontaneously and follow their instincts.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
スコア: 55.0提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清的问题，且句子冗长。建议简化句子结构，注意代词使用，并提高表达的准确性。
例: I prefer making lists on paper because it's easier to see and remember them, unlike on my phone where I might overlook the list.
文法
× That's what I that's the reason why I don't follow a list.
✓ That's the reason why I don't follow a list.
句子中出现了重复的短语“That's what I that's”，导致句子结构混乱。应删除多余部分，使句子结构完整通顺。
× Although I actually make a list every day for my work, but I don't usually follow that schedule strictly because I was very lazy person and my concentration is easily to be abstracted.
✓ Although I actually make a list every day for my work, I don't usually follow that schedule strictly because I am a very lazy person and my concentration is easily distracted.
句子中“Although”和“but”不能同时使用，属于句子结构错误；“was”时态不符合上下文，应使用现在时“am”；“easily to be abstracted”表达不正确，应改为“easily distracted”。
× my concentration is easily to be abstracted.
✓ my concentration is easily distracted.
动词“abstracted”用法错误，正确表达应为“distracted”，表示注意力被分散。
× I mostly prefer to make lists on a paper because making lists on the paper is more intuitive than making a list on my.
✓ I mostly prefer to make lists on paper because making lists on paper is more intuitive than making a list on my phone.
介词“on a paper”错误，正确用法是“on paper”；句尾缺少名词“phone”，导致表达不完整。
× When I'm watching my mobile phones, I have no time spared to notice the list in my.
✓ When I'm using my mobile phone, I have no time to notice the list on it.
“watching my mobile phones”表达不当，应为“using my mobile phone”；“no time spared to notice”表达不自然，应为“no time to notice”；“in my”缺少名词，改为“on it”更合适。
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