List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn cần rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn. Bạn nên tránh lỗi ngữ pháp như 'I'm often make' và sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh, ví dụ: 'I often make a list to avoid wasting money.' Hơn nữa, hãy thêm liên từ để câu trả lời tự nhiên và có tính kết nối hơn.

例: I sometimes make a list when I shop, especially now because it helps me avoid wasting money and buying unnecessary items.

提案: Bạn cần chú ý ngữ pháp và cách dùng từ, ví dụ 'avoid waste time' nên là 'avoid wasting time'. Ngoài ra, câu trả lời nên có cấu trúc rõ ràng hơn với câu chủ đề và các chi tiết hỗ trợ được liên kết bằng từ nối.

例: Yes, I make a list for my work and it works well because it helps me avoid wasting time and prioritize tasks effectively.

提案: Câu trả lời có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng chưa chính xác như 'takes many time' nên là 'takes a lot of time'. Bạn nên sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn. Hãy cố gắng diễn đạt ý tưởng rõ ràng và cụ thể hơn.

例: I think some people don't like making lists because it takes a lot of time and makes them feel restricted. However, I believe making lists is very helpful because it helps avoid wasting time.

提案: Câu trả lời có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và thiếu sự rõ ràng. Bạn nên sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh, tránh lặp từ và dùng từ phù hợp như 'helps me be flexible'. Hãy sắp xếp ý tưởng theo trình tự logic và dùng từ nối để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn.

例: I prefer to make lists both on paper and on my phone because it gives me flexibility. I can easily access my lists anytime and complete tasks without wasting much time.

× But now I'm often make a list to avoid wasting or save money.

✓ But now I often make a list to avoid wasting or saving money.

The verb 'make' should be in the base form after 'I often' without 'am'. Also, 'wasting or save money' is inconsistent; both verbs should be in the same form, so 'wasting or saving money' is correct.

× Yes I do and it works because when I make a list for my work I can avoid waste time and I can know what was necessary to do 1st and this priority.

✓ Yes, I do and it works because when I make a list for my work I can avoid wasting time and I can know what is necessary to do first and its priority.

The phrase 'avoid waste time' should be 'avoid wasting time' because 'avoid' is followed by a gerund. 'What was necessary' should be 'what is necessary' to match present tense. '1st' should be spelled out as 'first'. 'This priority' should be 'its priority' to refer correctly to the list.

× I think people don't like making lists because it takes many time and it fits the time that we can't do anything out of it.

✓ I think people don't like making lists because it takes a lot of time and it limits the time so that we can't do anything outside of it.

'Many time' is incorrect; 'time' is uncountable, so 'a lot of time' is correct. 'Fits the time' is unclear; 'limits the time' is more appropriate. 'Out of it' should be 'outside of it' for clarity.

× But I think make list it very helpful because it can help we avoid waste time.

✓ But I think making a list is very helpful because it can help us avoid wasting time.

'Make list' should be 'making a list' to use the gerund form. 'It very helpful' needs the verb 'is'. 'Help we' is incorrect; it should be 'help us'. 'Avoid waste time' should be 'avoid wasting time'.

× I do both. I also make a list on my paper and my because it's help me flexible and I can whenever I need.

✓ I do both. I also make a list on my paper and my phone because it helps me be flexible and I can access it whenever I need.

'My' is incomplete; it should be 'my phone'. 'It's help me flexible' is incorrect; it should be 'it helps me be flexible'. 'I can whenever I need' is incomplete; 'I can access it whenever I need' is clearer.

× I can open it and see it and do it.

✓ I can open it, see it, and use it.

The sentence is repetitive and awkward. Using commas and changing 'do it' to 'use it' improves clarity and flow.

× It's not take many time to do much time to do.

✓ It doesn't take much time to do.

'It's not take many time' is grammatically incorrect; the correct form is 'It doesn't take much time'. The phrase 'to do much time to do' is redundant and incorrect.