List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不够自然的问题，例如“keeps me reminded”应为“keeps me reminded”或“reminds me”。建议使用更自然的表达方式，并避免冗长和重复。

例: Yes, I usually make a shopping list because it helps me remember all the items I need. For example, when I go to Sam's Club, I buy many things, so without a list, I might forget some important items.

提案: 回答结构不够清晰，句子较长且语法错误较多。建议直接回答问题，使用简洁明了的句子，并用连接词使表达更连贯。

例: Yes, I make a list for my work because it helps me remember important tasks. If I don't, I might forget deadlines, which could lead to problems.

提案: 回答表达不清晰，逻辑混乱。建议分两部分说明原因，使用连接词使句子更连贯，避免模糊表达。

例: Some people don't like making lists because they are very organized and can remember everything. Others might be careless and don't bother to make lists.

提案: 回答较为自然，但部分表达可以更简洁流畅。建议使用连接词连接句子，使表达更连贯。

例: I prefer making lists on my phone because it has a useful app for recording my daily tasks. This helps me stay organized and complete everything on time.

× Yes, I think making a list keeps me reminded of what items I should buy.

✓ Yes, I think making a list keeps me reminded of what items I should buy.

此句中“keeps me reminded”结构不符合语法规则，应该用“keeps me reminded”改为“reminds me”或“keeps me remembering”，但根据题目要求只纠正列出的语法错误，动词+ing形式无误，故不改。

× Especially I go to Sam's Club, I will choose many goods to buy and if I don't make a list, I will forget about something that's really awful.

✓ Especially when I go to Sam's Club, I will choose many goods to buy and if I don't make a list, I will forget about something that's really awful.

句中缺少连接词“when”，导致句子结构不完整，属于句子结构错误，但根据题目要求只纠正列出的语法错误，故不改。

× Yes, if I don't need to make a list about what things to do, I may forget what important items I should keep in mind that will make me not to do things on time.

✓ Yes, if I don't make a list about what things to do, I may forget what important items I should keep in mind that will make me not do things on time.

“make me not to do”中“to”是不必要的，情态动词后动词用原形，去掉“to”更符合语法。

× Say maybe very careful about everything as they can keep everything in their mind so they don't need to make a list, but several others who care little about the things they do so they don't make a list.

✓ Maybe some people are very careful about everything as they can keep everything in their mind so they don't need to make a list, but several others care little about the things they do so they don't make a list.

句子缺少主语和谓语，且“Say maybe”用法不当，应该补充主语和谓语使句子完整。

× I prefer to make a list on my phone because my iPhone has really a good app to record my daily routine.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone because my iPhone has a really good app to record my daily routine.

“really a good app”中“really”修饰形容词时应放在形容词前，正确顺序是“a really good app”。