List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tự nhiên và rõ ràng, nhưng bạn có thể thêm một số chi tiết cụ thể hơn để làm câu trả lời phong phú hơn và sử dụng từ nối để câu văn mạch lạc hơn.

例: Yes, I always make a list when I shop because it helps me remember all the items I need and prevents me from overspending. For instance, I usually write it down on paper before I go to the supermarket, which makes my shopping more efficient.

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn có một số lỗi ngữ pháp và câu không rõ nghĩa, bạn nên chú ý sử dụng cấu trúc câu chính xác và tránh lỗi lặp từ. Ngoài ra, hãy thêm từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

例: Yes, I make a list for my work because it helps me stay organized and focus on my tasks. I usually use a digital app that reminds me about deadlines, and I feel satisfied when I can check off completed tasks.

提案: Bạn đã trả lời đúng trọng tâm câu hỏi nhưng có lỗi lặp từ và câu trả lời có thể thêm từ nối để mạch lạc hơn. Hãy chú ý tránh lặp từ và mở rộng câu trả lời với ví dụ hoặc lý do cụ thể hơn.

例: Some people don't like making lists because seeing a long list can make them feel stressed. Moreover, they might worry about completing all the tasks and feel disappointed if they cannot finish everything.

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tốt nhưng có lỗi nhỏ về từ ngữ (easy easier). Bạn nên chú ý sử dụng từ đúng và có thể thêm từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

例: I prefer to make a list on paper because I enjoy the feeling of writing things down. It is easier for me to remember tasks that way, and I also like crossing items off the list when I finish them.

× It helps me remember what I need to buy and keep me from spending too much money.

✓ It helps me remember what I need to buy and keeps me from spending too much money.

The verb 'helps' is third person singular, so the following verb should agree in form. After 'helps me', the verb should be in the third person singular form 'keeps' to maintain subject-verb agreement.

× Yes, I make a list from my work.

✓ Yes, I make a list for my work.

The preposition 'from' is incorrect here. The correct preposition to indicate purpose or relation is 'for'. 'Make a list for my work' means the list is intended to help with work tasks.

× I use a digital app that reminds me about my test and I feel good when I can check think of.

✓ I use a digital app that reminds me about my tasks, and I feel good when I can check them off.

The original sentence is unclear and contains errors. 'Check think of' is incorrect; the intended phrase is likely 'check them off', meaning to mark tasks as completed. Also, a comma is needed before 'and' to separate independent clauses.

× They might worry about getting everything done and feel bad if they cannot finish all the all the tasks.

✓ They might worry about getting everything done and feel bad if they cannot finish all the tasks.

The phrase 'all the all the tasks' contains a repeated article 'all the'. Removing the duplicate corrects the plural noun phrase.

× It's easy easier for me to remember things that way, and I enjoy crossing things off the list when I'm done.

✓ It's easier for me to remember things that way, and I enjoy crossing things off the list when I'm done.

The word 'easy' is incorrectly used before 'easier'. The correct comparative form 'easier' should be used alone to express comparison.