List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to respond directly to the question with a clear topic sentence and supporting details. Avoid unnecessary phrases like 'Thank you' in your answer. Use linking words to make your answer coherent.

例: Yes, I usually make a list when I shop because it helps me remember what I need. For example, I write down groceries and household items to avoid forgetting anything.

提案: Your answer is confusing and contains irrelevant information ('it's Washington'). Focus on directly answering the question with clear and relevant details. Use linking words to explain why making a list works for you.

例: Yes, I make a list for my work tasks, and it works well because it helps me stay organized and complete my duties on time.

提案: Your answer addresses the question but has grammatical errors and lacks linking words. Try to use correct verb forms and connect your ideas logically. Provide specific reasons with linking words.

例: Some people don't like making lists because they feel it takes too much time to write everything down. Instead, they prefer to rely on their memory to remember their tasks.

提案: Your answer is understandable but could be clearer and more coherent. Use linking words to connect your ideas and avoid short, incomplete sentences. Also, correct minor grammar mistakes.

例: I prefer to make lists on my phone because I always have it with me. Additionally, I use the calendar app to set reminders, which helps me remember tasks more effectively.

× Yes, I don't have a list but I'm trying to look at it what I'm interesting.

✓ Yes, I don't have a list but I'm trying to look at what I'm interested in.

The phrase 'what I'm interesting' is incorrect because 'interesting' is an adjective describing something that causes interest, not a state of being interested. The correct form is 'interested', which is the past participle used as an adjective to describe a person's feelings. Also, the preposition 'in' is needed after 'interested' to complete the phrase.

× Yes, I made a list for my things to do and it's worth because it's Washington.

✓ Yes, I made a list of my things to do and it was worth it because it helped me stay organized.

The original sentence has unclear meaning and incorrect use of 'it's worth because it's Washington.' The phrase 'it's worth' should be 'it was worth it' to match the past tense 'made.' Also, 'for my things to do' should be 'of my things to do' to correctly express the list's content. The phrase 'because it's Washington' is unclear and likely a mistake; it was replaced with a clearer explanation.

× Some people doesn't like make a list, sometimes not enough time for write on it and of course they try to remember it and everything they need to do.

✓ Some people don't like to make a list; sometimes there is not enough time to write on it, and of course, they try to remember everything they need to do.

The subject 'Some people' is plural, so the verb should be 'don't' instead of 'doesn't' (subject-verb agreement). Also, 'like make a list' should be 'like to make a list' to use the correct infinitive form. The phrase 'not enough time for write on it' is incorrect; it should be 'not enough time to write on it.' Adding 'there is' clarifies the sentence structure.

× I prefer to make a list on my phone because I'm always using it and also put on calendar to re remind me.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone because I'm always using it and also put it on the calendar to remind me.

The phrase 'put on calendar' is missing the article 'the' before 'calendar.' Also, 're remind' is incorrect; it should be 'remind.' The pronoun 'it' is needed after 'put' to specify what is being put on the calendar.

× And yes. Just do remember right away. That's it.

✓ And yes, I just remember things right away. That's it.

The original sentences are fragmented and lack proper structure. 'Just do remember right away' is awkward; it should be 'I just remember things right away' to form a complete and clear sentence.