List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答较为自然，但存在重复词汇（"and and"）和语法错误，建议注意语法准确性和避免重复，同时可以适当使用连接词使表达更流畅。

例: I usually don't make a list when I go shopping because I prefer to explore the store freely. This way, I can discover new products and try different things without feeling restricted.

提案: 回答中语法和表达不够清晰，句子结构混乱，建议加强句子结构的准确性和逻辑性，避免重复表达。

例: Yes, I always make a list for my studies because I am preparing for the IELTS test. Making a list helps me plan my day and organize the tasks I need to complete.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清，建议简化句子结构，使用正确的时态和词汇，并且用连接词使表达更连贯。

例: Some people don't like making lists because it can make them feel stressed. If they can't finish all the tasks, they may feel a lot of pressure.

提案: 回答中有较多口语填充词，表达不够流畅，建议减少口头语，完善句子结构，并具体说明手机列清单的便利性。

例: I prefer to make lists on my phone because I always carry it with me. It's very convenient since I can set alarms or use Siri to help me manage my tasks.

× Well, I usually don't make a list when I go shopping because I prefer to explore the store freely and by this way I can discover the new products and and try some new things without feeling restricted.

✓ Well, I usually don't make a list when I go shopping because I prefer to explore the store freely and in this way I can discover new products and try some new things without feeling restricted.

这里的错误是“the new products”中“the”不必要，且“and and”重复。应去掉多余的“and”，并且“new products”前不需要定冠词“the”，因为这里指的是泛指的新产品。建议使用“in this way”替代“by this way”，更符合习惯表达。

× Yes, absolutely I will make a list for my study, you know I am studying else test and I will make a list to plan the day I had to do what the task I had to do.

✓ Yes, absolutely I make a list for my study, you know I am studying for another test and I make a list to plan the day and what tasks I have to do.

这里时态使用不当，描述习惯性动作应使用一般现在时，而非将来时“will make”。另外，“else test”应为“another test”，且句子结构混乱，需调整为“plan the day and what tasks I have to do”以表达清晰。

× Well, I think the reason why some people don't like to make a list is that make a list will make the make people feel stressful and if you can't finish the task it has many pressure on you.

✓ Well, I think the reason why some people don't like to make a list is that making a list will make people feel stressed and if you can't finish the tasks it puts a lot of pressure on you.

“make a list”作为主语时应使用动名词“making a list”。“make people feel stressful”应改为“make people feel stressed”，因为“stressful”形容事物，“stressed”形容人。“the make people”多余且错误。最后，“the task”应为复数“tasks”，且“has many pressure”应改为“puts a lot of pressure”，更符合表达习惯。

× Uh, As for me, I prefer to make a list on my phone because I will take a phone every everywhere and every time, umm And uh, use phone is very convenient because umm, you can set alarm or use the Siri to.

✓ Uh, as for me, I prefer to make a list on my phone because I take my phone everywhere and all the time. Umm, and using the phone is very convenient because, umm, you can set alarms or use Siri.

“take a phone every everywhere and every time”中“a phone”应为“my phone”，“every everywhere”错误，应为“everywhere”，“every time”改为“all the time”更自然。句子后半部分“use phone is very convenient”缺少主语，应改为“using the phone is very convenient”。“set alarm”应为复数“set alarms”，“use the Siri to”中“the”不应出现，且“to”多余，应为“use Siri”。