List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答中有语法错误和用词不当，如“did not make colleagues”应为“did not make lists”，且表达不够自然。建议注意基本语法和词汇的准确使用，同时回答应更简洁，避免重复。

例: No, I usually don't make a shopping list because I can remember what I need to buy. Also, I feel that making a list restricts my choices while shopping.

提案: 回答较为完整，但有口语填充词“uh, you know”，影响流畅性。建议减少口语填充词，使用更正式的表达，并且用连接词使句子更连贯。

例: Yes, I make a rough list for my work that mainly highlights deadlines. This helps me manage my tasks effectively and submit them on time.

提案: 句子结构不完整且语法错误较多，如“making a list and gave them a feeling”应为“making a list gives them a feeling”。建议加强语法练习，使用正确的时态和主谓一致。

例: Some people don't like making lists because they feel restricted and prefer to arrange their time freely. They may also want to adapt to changes rather than follow a fixed schedule.

提案: 表达中有不自然的用词，如“the IT provides me with the calendar”，应更具体说明。建议使用更自然的表达方式，并注意句子简洁和逻辑连贯。

例: I prefer making lists on my phone because it has a calendar app that lets me add and check tasks anytime and anywhere, which is more convenient than carrying paper.

× Honestly, I did not make colleagues when I showed up because I could remember all these things that I need to buy in my mind instead of writing in the paper.

✓ Honestly, I did not make a list when I went shopping because I could remember all the things that I needed to buy in my mind instead of writing them on paper.

这里的错误是动词时态和词汇使用错误。"make colleagues" 应为 "make a list"，且 "showed up" 不符合购物场景，应改为 "went shopping"。此外，"need" 应用过去时 "needed"，因为描述的是过去的情况。"writing in the paper" 应改为 "writing them on paper"，更符合英语表达习惯。

× And also the list gave me a feeling that I'm restricted to the list.

✓ And also the list gave me a feeling that I'm restricted by the list.

这里介词使用错误，"restricted to" 应改为 "restricted by"，表示被列表限制。

× Uh, rather I make a very rough list just, you know, highlight the deadline of my work so that I can know when I should sign this thing up and hand it over.

✓ Uh, rather I make a very rough list just to, you know, highlight the deadline of my work so that I can know when I should sign this thing and hand it over.

这里缺少不定式 "to"，表示目的。"sign this thing up" 中的 "up" 不合适，应去掉。

× Well, I think for some people making a list and gave them a feeling of restricted and they could not freely arrange their life and time and maybe they prefer to catering to the changes to the times instead of just following the written schedule.

✓ Well, I think for some people making a list gives them a feeling of restriction and they cannot freely arrange their life and time and maybe they prefer to cater to the changes of the times instead of just following the written schedule.

这里时态和动词形式错误。"making a list and gave" 应改为 "making a list gives"，保持主谓一致。"feeling of restricted" 应改为 "feeling of restriction"，名词形式更合适。"could not" 改为 "cannot"，保持一般现在时。"prefer to catering" 应改为 "prefer to cater"，不定式形式。"changes to the times" 应改为 "changes of the times"，介词使用错误。

× I prefer to make a list on my phone because the IT provides me with the calendar and I can take down things very freely and I can check it up wherever and whenever instead of carrying a paper to anywhere.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone because the IT provides me with a calendar and I can take down things very freely and I can check it wherever and whenever instead of carrying paper anywhere.

这里介词和冠词使用错误。"the calendar" 应改为 "a calendar"，表示泛指。"check it up" 中 "up" 多余，应去掉。"carrying a paper to anywhere" 应改为 "carrying paper anywhere"，去掉冠词和介词 "to"，更符合英语习惯。