List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答有些重复且语法错误较多，表达不够自然。建议简化句子结构，避免冗余，并注意时态和单复数的正确使用。

例: I rarely make a shopping list because I usually only buy urgent items. For example, if I run out of milk or bread at home, I will buy them immediately.

提案: 回答中有语法错误和重复，表达不够流畅。建议使用更准确的时态和词汇，避免重复，并用连接词使句子更连贯。

例: Yes, I always make a list for my school work because I have competitions and homework. Making a list helps me organize my time efficiently and improve my productivity.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题。建议简化句子结构，使用更准确的词汇，并用连接词使观点更连贯。

例: Some people dislike making lists because they have good memories and don't need reminders. Others may have few tasks, so they prefer to focus on what comes up naturally.

提案: 回答表达不够清晰，有语法和逻辑问题。建议简化表达，明确比较两者的优缺点，并使用连接词使句子流畅。

例: I prefer making lists on my phone because typing is faster and more convenient. However, when I was a student without a smartphone, I used to write lists on paper.

× I just buy the things which is much very urgent.

✓ I just buy the things which are very urgent.

这里的主语是复数'things'，谓语动词应该用复数形式'are'，而不是单数'is'。

× I will buy the milk or bread if my house run out of milk and bread.

✓ I will buy milk or bread if my house runs out of milk and bread.

'milk'和'bread'是不可数名词，不需要加定冠词'the'。主语'my house'是单数，谓语动词应使用第三人称单数形式'runs'。

× I had to arrange my time reasonably to finish them.

✓ I have to arrange my time reasonably to finish them.

这里描述的是现在的习惯或常态，应该用现在时'have to'，而不是过去时'had to'。

× the people have good memories so they don't need to make a list.

✓ people have good memories so they don't need to make a list.

'people'本身就是复数形式，不需要加定冠词'the'。

× And the second people is that they don't have much things to do,

✓ And the second reason is that they don't have many things to do,

'people'用法错误，应改为'reason'。'things'是可数名词，前面应使用'many'而非'much'。

× I like to make a list of phones because I think typing this list, typing these things on the list on forms is much easier and quicker for me.

✓ I like to make a list on my phone because I think typing this list, typing these things on the list on forms is much easier and quicker for me.

介词'of'用错，正确表达是'make a list on my phone'，表示在手机上制作清单。

× And I had to make that.

✓ And I had to do that.

句子不完整，'make that'表达不清，应改为'And I had to do that'表示过去必须做某事。

× I used to make list on papers when I was a student and because I don't have a smartphone, so I had to make a list on the papers.

✓ I used to make lists on paper when I was a student because I didn't have a smartphone, so I had to make lists on paper.

'list'应为复数'lists'，'papers'应为不可数名词'paper'，时态应保持一致，过去时用'didn't have'。